I edited the deck please comment on how to make this deck better.

Monsters:

2x Gogogo Giant

3x Poki Draco

Sangan

Yellow Gadget

Red Gadget

Green Gadget

Spear Cretin

3x Goblindbergh

2x Marauding Captain

2x Fire Fox

3x Saambell Summoner

3x UFO Turtle

2x Gogogo Golem

Second Booster

Achacha Archer


Spells:
Attraffic Control

2x MST

Monster Reborn

3x Crashbug Road

Magical Mallet

Heavy Storm


Traps;
2x Bottomless Traphole

Dimensional Prison

2x Prideful Road

3x Fiery Fervor

Mirror Force

Extra Deck:

Gachi Gachi Gantetsu
Number 96: Dark Mist
2x Grenosaurus
Number 17: Leviathan Dragon
Number 30: Acid Golem of Destruction
Number 34: Terror-Byte
Number 10: Illumiknight
2x Number 39: Utopia
Number C39: Utopia Ray

Well, well well, i c this deck is above 40 which is a kinda unconsistent and i think its a good idea to focus on one group of monsters rather than combining all together, u better focus on gagaga magician deck since its better in xyz due its powerful eff, so max both gagaga magican and the girl and remove all those crashbugs, better max tour and sangan instaed, nt to mention since all r dark mystic tomato is a decent pick..

n u did kinda ok building this deck for the first time but m sure u will improve in the near future

thanks i'll try that

um lemme ask armored bee, damage gate and threatening roar and defense draw why exactly?
if u get loads of xyz monsters out u dont need such petty defense cards tho keep mirrorforce and prideful roar since they can get rid of annoying monsters quite easily.
um archacha archa is useless all it does is 500 damage -.- and really? woodborg inpachi? a lv5 normal monster? really? ok u want xyz deck right?
so here are the changes: -1 defense draw -1 threatening roar -1 damage gate -1 armored bee -1 woodborg inpachi -all 3 crashbugs -1gilasaurus -the 3 gadgets -1kagemucha knight -1helping robo thingy -1second booster -2 ufo turtle -1 gogogo golem and -1 gogogo giant -1mobius the frost monarch -1 archacha archer -1 crashbug road and -1 magical arm shield (for some reason this card pops up in a lot of ur decks o.o) -2 grenosaurus -1 temtempto the percussion djinn and -1zenmaister
now for the adds +2 tourguide +3 gagaga girl +2 gagaga magician +1/2 double summon (optional)
+3 rescue rabbit (if u want dino rabbit, if u do then +3 sabersaurus and +3 kabazauls and +2 laggia and +1 dolkka and +2 leviair, if u dont then dont add the rabbit or any of the ones in the bracket.) +1 dark hole +2 summoner monk and +2 reborn tengu and +3 deep sea diva and +1 gachi gachi gantetsu +2 xyz reborn +2 xyz reflect +2 overlay regenerate
well thats all i can think of if u find that your hand gets to 0 cards quite a lot then +3 infernity beetle and +1 more gachi

well i use the woodborg because of UFO turtle's ability to search for a fire monster with 1500 or below attack which if i got 2 woodborgs then i get adreus. the reason i use more defense cards is because i'm used to dueling people who are quicker on the attack than i am so i use defensive moves instead.

well then you just need to attack first and dont let ur opp get the chance to attack
i went over what i said and i realised that some of the stuff dont make sense since u got ardreus which is a reasonably good card without lv 5 monsters so.... im gonna say +2 woodborg inpachi +2 magical mallet (to refresh some of the cards in hand or if woodborg gets in ur hand) umm maybe +1 ancient rules and +1/2 swing of memories (if u want dino rabbit have 3) hmmm +2 ufo turtle and definately +2 machine duplication (get woodborg on the field then machine duplication u can get ardreus or dbokak out) which reminds me +1 dbokak
if u want u can have +3 inferno reckless summon but thats optional

ok thanks

ok so today i got a C39:Utopia Ray, Baby Tiragon, and Number 96: Dark Mist any ideas on how i can add them? im going to take out the djinn and the grenosaurus then add acorno, pinecono, saambell summoner, stinging swordsman, ancient gears and magnet circle lvl 2. if you have any other ideas just tell me.

Its just that i m nt familiar wit those cards u mentioned...

your deck has too many elements in to do his job properly. you should stick to 1 main strategy in the deck with many tactics to achieve the purpose of that strategy. i bet you want a deck that swarms xyz monsters without losing all too much card advantage. try using monsters that can be special summon easily on their own for example: "spell striker". also try using monsters that can be summoned from the deck like: "tour guide, diva, gk spy" and such. i hope it helps

i dont need lvl 3's and 4's i just need 1's and 2's to xyz summon dark mist and tiragon.

Keep Tiragon out in my opinion and if you are using UFO turtle then add 2/3 Fox Fire because if they're destroyed they can be sp from grave and they're level 2 so you can summon dark mist

Ok thanks

um i would keep out tiragon too if u want rank 1 xyz then u shud put that in a seperate deck namely piper or chaos piper or sumthin
um as for dark mist.... it needs 3 level 2s doesnt it? so that wont come out very easily..... unless u reborn somethin. the best rank 2 xyz is gachi and as ive said infernity beetle works well with it but only if u have no cards in hand.
the best card for gachi or any rank 2 xyz is probably deep sea diva its a tuner too so u can get synchros out

ok thanks i'm actually trying 2 xyz decks when i get them done ill post one here as an edit and the other as a new post

well, the possible xyz decks are

constellar, gogogo xyz, rabbit decks (not just dino rabbit), tour guide chaos decks (ill explain that one), crane xyz, gadget xyz, and ninjas

then there's also wind ups......pick and choose

U can also xyz dark mist easily in a agent deck.. just use venus eff to summon all 3 mystical balls and boom dark mist

ok i might try that. it depends on if i can get them anymore