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bakura normal Moderator
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| Subject: just some stuff i did Sun Apr 25, 2010 12:49 pm | |
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Dragon D. DarkNess Beginner
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| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Sun Apr 25, 2010 1:04 pm | |
| Good stuff The effect with Yami is cool but could be improved with some practise 1st 5.5/10 2nd 7/10 3rd 6.5/10 |
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Georgenal Beginner
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| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Sun Apr 25, 2010 1:33 pm | |
| 2/10 2/10 4/10 Keep it up! You will improve. It seems that I rated them like they were a pro's artwork |
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XanXus Beginner
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| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:51 pm | |
| u will improve very soon Yuesi chan....XD nice try |
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bakura normal Moderator
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| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Sun May 09, 2010 12:38 pm | |
| It's ok but you need more work with the background and the text.
1st 4.5/10 2nd 5/10 |
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bakura normal Moderator
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| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Sun May 09, 2010 9:46 pm | |
| well how bout this 1 ? lolz |
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| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Sun May 09, 2010 10:24 pm | |
| Nice, better than the rest Remove the 3D like effect in the background pattern, remove the stroke around the text and blend in the renders(pics) im with the background. 5.5/10 |
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Blast Beginner
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| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Sun May 09, 2010 11:21 pm | |
| your improving already that last 1 looks better than the rest but as Dark said remove that 3d it doesnt go with those pics i know u will improve 4.5/10 |
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bakura normal Moderator
Posts : 1110
| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Wed May 19, 2010 8:49 pm | |
| new (wwe) sig lolz |
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| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Wed May 19, 2010 8:54 pm | |
| It's ok, the background effects are very good but you need to get renders which are around the same colours as the bg, and blend them in with the bg. 6.5/10 You're improving |
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Blast Beginner
Posts : 694
| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Wed May 19, 2010 9:25 pm | |
| its too empty put something in the middle 4.5/10 again |
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bakura normal Moderator
Posts : 1110
| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Sun May 23, 2010 3:41 pm | |
| new 1 |
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bakura normal Moderator
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| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Mon May 24, 2010 9:59 pm | |
| Hmm, the background is kinda bad, don't use those Lightning Effects, they suck when not used probably Try blending in the renders and adding more effects to it. The text is again too big, and not the right font. Work on your text! >.< |
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bakura normal Moderator
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| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Wed May 26, 2010 10:05 pm | |
| Gosh! Please do not copy the people in NDA, using C4Ds as a background >.< +) I saw the works in NDA and I thought to myself "Do they seriously think that's good?" Anyway, other than that the colours are good, when using the Light thingy it's good not to show it too much, it's good if it's 1/2 or 3/4 covered by a render or something. For now, use 1 render only! The text is abit too big, the font is ok but the effects on the text isn't that good, the text is just there as a little thingy it shouldn't stick out. It's good 7.5/10 |
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bakura normal Moderator
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| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Wed May 26, 2010 10:21 pm | |
| lolz long dd but thanks for tips ^^ (btw i didnt copy nda lolz i just dd it XD) new 1 |
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bakura normal Moderator
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| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Mon May 31, 2010 5:36 pm | |
| Okie, hmm, your bgs are getting better but the prob is that you fill it with C4Ds, try blending the C4Ds using the smudge tool and using either "Lighten", "Screen" or "Linear Dodge" for the blending modes, also resize the C4D to make it not cover the whole thing. Make the actual renders bigger so that you can only see half of it, it looks better thay way. Your texts are getting better, the font on the pikatchu one is good, I think that's the Default one I was talking about, choose a colour that would fit the rest, always do the text at the end. For the Pikatchu one, Orange would fit well. Halo: 5.5/10 Avatar: 7/10 (add colour, I know it didn't work before ) Spiderman: 5.7/10 (I don't think it's 6/10) Pikatchu: 6/10 |
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bakura normal Moderator
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| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Fri Jun 04, 2010 9:33 pm | |
| ty dd ^^ |
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| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Fri Jun 04, 2010 10:13 pm | |
| Okie, hmm... don't use any kinda of effects on the render, only use the blending modes, don't always do that lightning effect...hmmm.... you could try smudging it o.0 I wanna try that 0.o... Anyway, use at least 1 C4D and put it on a blending mode. 6.5/10 |
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bakura normal Moderator
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| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Sun Jun 06, 2010 12:29 am | |
| new 1 |
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Blast Beginner
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| Subject: Re: just some stuff i did Sun Jun 06, 2010 12:46 am | |
| Randy Orton: 3/10 Ghost Rider (i think): 6/10 but to much over use of the red Oh yea whats up with DD always saying use Blending Options even though it will look better but let him discover his own style and then perfect it |
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