Hey guys, I think i need some help on this deck so rate, comment, fix please.

Total cards - 41

Monsters- 21
1 DAD
1 dandylion
1 treeborn frog
1 sangan
2 mystic tomato
1 plaguespreader zombie
2 krebons
1 psychic commander
2 caius the shadow monarch
2 mobius the frost monarch
2 raiza the storm monarch
1 granmarg the rock monarch
1 thestalos the fire monarch
1 zaborg the thunder monarch
2 destiny hero malicious

Spells - 10
2 dark world dealings
1 emergency teleport
2 soul exchange
1 book of moon
1 heavy storm
1 mystical space typhoon
1 double summon
1 brain control

Traps - 10
2 by order of the emperor
1 trap dustshoot
2 royal oppression
1 mirror force
1 bottomless shifting sands
1 bottomless trap hole
1 dust tornado
1 ultimate offering

ma fixes

-1 ultimate offering
-1 bottomless shifing sand
-1 dust tornado
-2 bt order of the emperor
-2 royal oppression

-1 book of life
-1 double summon
-2 dark world dealings
-2 soul exchange

-1 fire monarch
-1 earth monarch
-2 raiza the storm monarch
-1 mobius

-18 cards lol O.O ..

traps - +3
+1 bottomless trap hole
+1 toorential tribute
+1 threatening Roar

spells - +7
+2 foolish burial ( u can choose the card u want to go to the grave plague/treeborn/malicius)
+2 allure of the darkness/dark work dealings...ur wish
+1 mind control
+1 smashing ground
+1 lighting vortex
+2 book of moon ( helps save u from effects -some- or attacks and stuff)

monsters - +7
+1 gorz
+1 shadow monarch
+1 lighing monarch
+1 cyber dragon
+2 grave keeper spy
+1 grave keeper guard


hope this helps .... monarches are my speciality

i changed book of life on my post to book of moon, idk why i typed book of life but i did. lol. thanks for the changes, i'm gonna try them out.

gl p.s. soul exchange sucks! ... u need a monster on ur side of the field first b4 u sacrafice ur opp's ....

o and type the results u had with it!!.. and due to what main card did u loose

u did a lot of changes

true ... i changed half da deck ...O.O ...
it's now in ma style

LOL you have to make this deck but better than your fixes xD