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PostSubject: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Thu Jan 10, 2013 11:53 pm

Seething embers trigger my power,
as if a blooming flower,
it shall spread its colour,
bringing all the sorrow,
that your heart contains,
in the form of searing rains.
Here I am full of fuel,
ready for another duel!

Hello people!
Some of my friends call me Sunstorm ( due to an achievement of mine during KCVDS days ), but I like my new nickname as well - Solarion. I'm here to have fun, mainly by dueling, but also writting summoning intros and quotes and roleplaying. If you like the one above, I can make your own special one ^^


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Fri Jan 11, 2013 12:01 am

we have a poet here guys Razz
lol welcome to ADA Sunstorm :3 hope u enjoy ur stay here and have fun!! Very Happy


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Fri Jan 11, 2013 12:09 am

awesome poem, especially the last 2 sentences, packs alot of punch in it..

other than that, wlcm to ada and have fun


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Fri Jan 11, 2013 12:09 am

Thanks buddy, hoping the same ^^ I forgot to mention I'm no newbie to these sort of things. I've been in more than 5 duel academies. Sadly 4 of them fell apart and I left one for my friend ^^

If possible I'm going to open a shop for quotes like the one above ^^. I'm also looking for a tag team partner. And maybe someone to guide me around this academy xD It's been a while....


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Fri Jan 11, 2013 12:55 am

Well first off, I would like to say have fun, and enjoy your stay here at ADA.
Also, you are quite a poet. I quite enjoy that. I hope to ghet to know you and who knows. Maybe we will make some poems together. Hihih
Well hope you enjoy your stay here as much as possible. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Fri Jan 11, 2013 2:12 am

opening a quote shop would be interesting, also, other than checking out the site on the home page, http://www.advancedduelacademy.com/?pid=3 this might help to some extent..


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Fri Jan 11, 2013 8:06 am

Thanks ^^

@Koolkid:Already did that but I'm a bit confused. Do I request a test in the Staff Room or where?


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Fri Jan 11, 2013 2:30 pm

You can just PM staff (that would be me and alice). And welcome to ADA ^^




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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Fri Jan 11, 2013 4:26 pm

wtf with that roleplaying hobby._. welcome


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Fri Jan 11, 2013 4:27 pm

hmmm mayb he can answer my riddle? lol hi have fun


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Fri Jan 11, 2013 7:19 pm

Dat sig ^^ Kinda creepy assuming I just entered the academy xD

@Geoscout: What riddle? Come at me hehe


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Fri Jan 11, 2013 7:30 pm

Yeah, i'm also creeped out by that sig...

Anyways, really nice poem. Much better than anything i would be able to write
(but then again, i'm not very good at writing). Also, welcom, and have fun here at ADA Very Happy


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Fri Jan 11, 2013 7:32 pm

Thanks thanks ^^ I'm surprised how many people liked the poem. In the last academy I was ( about an year ago ) people were quite skeptical...


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Fri Jan 11, 2013 8:36 pm

Then would you feel at any ease, should I claim I am not impressed at all? (;


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Fri Jan 11, 2013 9:02 pm

Hey, I could be your tag team partner Very Happy although I cant seem to download ygopro O .o


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Fri Jan 11, 2013 9:24 pm

Lol DissonantHarmony, quite stubborn, aren't you ^^ Joking of course.

Geo, there are specific decks I use in tag duels. But I think you should first fix that problem and then we can test stuff ^^


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Sat Jan 12, 2013 12:59 am

It has less to do with being stubborn, and more to do with being a jerk, when it comes to flattering others. As braggart it shall look, that's probably because I have a lot of taltents; being so gifted, I easily have a hard time, spreading flatters, about too many things...And boy, verbal-linguistic intelligence may be my My strongest trait.

Have you ever read a poem, that uses 'the exact words'?
It doesn't have to be a complicated one, the words don't have to be rare, or hard; it may not even be a sad piece or art:
But it will still make you shiver, tear or cry, because something in the words chosen is too powerful, too correct...Every single word there has been so carefully and preciously picked...
This is what my songs, in hebrew are. They just simply powerful. Every sentence is just powerufl, pure dazzle! A magnificient construction.

Now let's get to the next level:
My hebrew is completely flowery. I'm capable of writing in a manner, that gives native speakers a hard time, understanding what that goes on.

My rhymes are simply the best. The words that are ryhmed have to end with the same syllable. I do not compromise on 'poor rhymes'.

There are always 'games' in my work, such as vereses that sound as if the same phrase is being repeated over and over (Different sentences, that connect to each other in a way, that sounds like that) and Literary devices.

A not complicated example, would be a song that opens with something that has to do with the clap of hands. Quickly, it takes the direction of playing the piano. I hint about the white and the black keys (they have a lot of other meanings, that are figured out later) and the song shifts (Only those who speak a flowery language would get that) to talking about every finger. (Indicated by the length of each sentence, as they take the shape of a palm).

The line, that has to do with the index finger says soemthing like: "And the second is pointed at the past". If you understand some flowery syntax, you will read the same sentence as: "And those are pointed everywhere", which can also be infered as: "Everyone is blaming me".
This is the point, where those who are good at analyzing poems do a backtrack and realize every sentence tells 2 (And a even 3rd, hidden one) different stories at the same time. Thoes are combined later and hint that this song doesn't speak about a piano concert (Nor even about hands and fingers, to those who have a better clue), but about the burden and the shame of something, that happened in the past. Something that everyone blamed me for.

I often make a lot of use in words that can be read in different ways:
The song is ended in the sentence: "Ve'ha'yiom mihyi notarti limhot". (And today, my clapping remained to be done).
This may be connected to 2 of the stories:
One, the glorious: "I'm so good, I finished now, and I clap myself, after my own performance".
The second, the shameful and lone: "I'm here alone, clapping for myself, because there is no one else to clap". (The word: "Notarti" is placed in a way, which can also mean that I'm actually the ono who 'remained', and not the claps are what that did).

[b]But[b/]: The real analyze, would question the last word: "Limhot". It is a common mistake, to say "limhot", as the verb: "Clap". The real and properly corect is actually: "Limho".
Now, why did I use that word? "Well, perhaps he's one of those who don't know that 'limho' is the correct way to go", one may think; but if you read again the entire sentence, you will spot that the word "mihyi" (My act of clapping) can actually be read as: "Me'hayiayi". (My own life). This a little harder to find, because in an everyday type of talking, it's common to say: "Et hayiayi", but again, this sentence is carefully written, in a way that in a different manner of syntax, it is legal to say: "Me'Me'hayiayi".
The word: "Limhot", is a flowery way to say: "Protest" or "Obliterate".

This tells us a 3rd story (If you re-read the poem, you will find some foreshadowing, hints to that) of me, that doesn't even mention claps. The line now either became a wish to die (in case of 'Protest': objecting my life, or regretting living), or even committing suicide. (In case of 'Obliterate').

Now, I skipped on many things that this song says and offers, and this is not even my most complicated work.

I have a 7 line long poem, that has so many special 'games' in it, it will take me 30 times the length of this post, to explain all the hints and riddles that were planted there...

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Yes, I'm being a huge dick now, but please don't judge me, or even worse - take any offence, if I'm not impressed, or fail to give you some credit. xD




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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Sat Jan 12, 2013 1:05 am

omg do u always write this much????? @.@


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Sat Jan 12, 2013 1:11 am

Yes. I usually either write too much (The convenience way, trust me) or compress all the ideas into mere few sentences, that only few can really understand.

Now, you can always skip it, if you are the one to avoid lengthy posts,
but if you know how to enjoy and appreciate sheer brillance (The case this time) or extremely infromative and helpful posts (Not at all, this time. xD) read it.


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Sat Jan 12, 2013 1:17 am

gotta say u are one hell of an amazing writer.... but the thing that i like the most, is u are actually spending a lot of time trying to help and explain to plp the right ways.. props to u meng, u earned my respect. +1


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Sat Jan 12, 2013 4:38 pm

You have the talent to write and that's what's driving your pencil. I have goals, aims. They are my reason to write the poems. Actually...I'll simply call them summoning intros. That's what they were intended for.

Some examples:

Holy mark of the light
is carved on his shoulder right.
His heart is full of might
and like a newborn star it's bright.
Xyz Summon! Rise,
Hieratic Divine Sun Dragon - Ennead!

Burning Soul! Searing will and raging spirit will burst at once!
Majestic flare light will shine upon and a super nova shall be born!
The blood will boil and the mind will shout! Double Tuning! Burst, Red Nova Dragon!

Burning Soul!
Monstrous strength infuses my soul,
just as ants in a dragon's maw,
my enemies I banish,
in eternal shadows they will vanish!
Phase into reality the moment I call,
you, incarnation of power raw!
Delta Accel Synchro!
Burst, Infernova Dragon! ( custom card I made for my friend . accel synchro version of Red Dragon Archfiend )

In the darkness he hides,
the shadows he rides.
In hope he does not believe,
because in a dark world he does live.
His hatred I consume,
and upon my enemies triumph!
Emerge from the shadows,
Grapha, Dragon Lord of Dark World! (this was a request in my previous academy, the first request in my summoning intros shop)

From the depths of my hatred he shall rise,
all enemies of mine in him will face demise!
Xyz Summon! Surface, Number 32: Shark Drake!

Proud of our fame...but in the end, we are just a shame....
Proud of our past...but we lost ourselves in the battle last...
Proud of being powerful...but on the inside, we are so sorrowful...
Drowning in despair...just like shadows mere...

Try guessing which archetype the "poem" above is about.

These are the ones I consider my best. I use the anime ones for 5D's synchro monsters ( except for red nova dragon ). Yusei's summoning intros for Stardust and Shooting Star really inspired me, eh...


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Sat Jan 12, 2013 5:56 pm

Dark World...maybe.
Did someone here watch the Charmed series. They really know how to put rhymes in line.
Dragon that crosses in time and space
Rise from hell and burn this world.
From your storm of roses, shall perish our enemies.
Rise, Black Rose Dragon.


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Sat Jan 12, 2013 6:40 pm

No offense but that doesnt even rhyme...and I get lost when I read it. Black Rose Dragon doesn't cross time and space at all. If cross is....correct to say in the first place. Also, nope not Dark World. And wtf is wrong with people posting I love X in their sigs? :/

Wtf is that mysterious senshi link above reply text field? It send me to some other site where my name is mentioned a lot but not refering to me but some..planet? dafuq?


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Sat Jan 12, 2013 7:30 pm

for the poem, is it a particular monster, or an archetype?... which series, 5ds?

for Wilber's sig, he put a speical code username, that whenevr someones sees his signature... that person's name appears on it..
but for tweedledum, apparently he wants to troll wilber so he puts his name on it lol

anyway, for that link.. it seems that link was from this old academy and links to post where similar topic is availabe, in this case.. its ur name which also means solar system or w.e it is...


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PostSubject: Re: Solarion, the Sunstorm   Sat Jan 12, 2013 7:39 pm

Well to solarion: With black dragon, that sign dragon than appears with the others of course, which does travel in time and what not, so therefore, he is partially correct while saying its symbolic meaning.


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