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PostSubject: Razzares's GFX   Sun Jul 08, 2012 3:59 am

Well as i said in my intro I'm making graphic stuff, still learning tho.Trying to find my own style.You already seen my signature that is my work, but here's another one of my signatures that i like:



Here some my works:
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So please comment and give me your suggestions.What i do wrong and what you like.Thanks




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PostSubject: Re: Razzares's GFX   Sun Jul 08, 2012 12:45 pm

Some admin removed the link, external links are not accepted sorry.
Your sig is very nice, just try using some other font, nice flow Very Happy






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PostSubject: Re: Razzares's GFX   Sun Jul 08, 2012 1:35 pm

i removed the link and said to post it here




















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PostSubject: Re: Razzares's GFX   Sun Jul 08, 2012 1:51 pm

I'm sorry about the link Wink I edited the first post, so now you can see some other of my things as well.


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PostSubject: Re: Razzares's GFX   Mon Jul 16, 2012 2:09 am

They are very nice

A general advice: keep the sense of light spots and the ambient, don't use a mess of C4Ds, try using a stock background that makes sense with render and add fitting c4ds to it, i promise you a nice outcome if you do it well Smile

Using abstract ambient is good but not always the best choice Wink






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PostSubject: Re: Razzares's GFX   Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:13 am

The light's a bit bright, and makes my eyes hurt a little. Maybe darkening it would help.


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PostSubject: Re: Razzares's GFX   Mon Jul 16, 2012 4:33 pm

You over use the c4d too much which sometimes mekes it look not that good.


The girl one i really do like most from all of them. But not the top right corner. That c4d dont really go there.


In the Red Eyes one it looks like you just painted the backround red and threw in C4D everywhere

The C4D in front like in the captain america wasnt really necessary. It doesnt even go with the image cuz the image kinda like faded/old (idk how to explain it) and the c4d isnt. if anything there you should of tried and blend it in.

The last one the same.

Also on the font try not to put it close to the middle of the image. if anything you trying to make everything blend in together and make it pop out. All your signatures are too dark. you use dark colors too much. try to use colors you dont really use.

Im not tryin to mean im just putting out all the negatives so you can work on them and make them into a positive and you be a better GFXer.

Well thats just my opinion you dont gotta listen to me.


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