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PostSubject: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Wed Oct 19, 2011 7:03 pm

well, with season one finished, its only fair that I start season 2 off

1st things 1st, a brief explanation of events going on

chapter 1: Prologue

A soul hacker is an entity of hate, said to have first been created by the souls of those used to create the 1st portal between the duel monsters realm and the human realm. Their souls were trapped in a void between the realms, which created the 1st opening, as well as the only known one. The whereabouts of this void is unknown, but its so far referred to as the shadow realm, and throughout history, soul hackers have been escaping repeatedly. With total hate for the human race, who trapped their souls there, they are capable of engulfing humans with hate, warping their judgment and possessing their souls to become like them, and using that possessed body to help corrupt others, among other abilities. They are a threat to humans, but their existence is kept a secret due to the unneeded attention it can draw. It is unknown however, the origins of soul duelists or how they are made, but what is known is that they are the opposite of soul hackers, as well as their greatest threat. With almost all the capabilities of a soul hacker, these are said to be incapable of being hacked by them, while being just as strong as they are, whereas soul hackers can fill souls with hate, soul duelists have the ability to expunge all the hate from a person, although how they do this is unknown, and being humans, this can always return given the right stimuli.
Nonetheless soul duelists are rare, so other means of defense were formed. Soul discs were created by the 5th recorded soul duelist, Enrion, and can give humans the ability to summon duel monsters outside of battle. The summoned monsters are only illusions of the real ones, and can only harm other duel monsters. The disc is also capable of creating a soul duel, an ability soul hackers have which is the means by which they infect other duelists, where by defeating them, the loser becomes a soul hacker. The difference with the soul disc, is that if the soul hacker is defeated, the entity is forced back to the shadow realm, returning control of the body back to the owner, that is, he becomes a normal human again. Duel Machines were another form of defense. Capable of the same actions humans can do, dueling wise. these are also considered incapable of being infected, as they have no soul within them. Easily repaired and not too expensive to generate, these can be used both for dealing with soul hackers, and for general purpose use dueling wise, and quite a few can be found in academies. They can also use soul discs as well. Some also come with special abilities that make them useful for tasks other than dueling, like the self learning and reliance program installed in Machina Gearframe 000, in which it can write its own functions based on what it sees taking place around him. This duel machine, however, was destroyed in 2235, at the 2nd New Domino Incident, and since then, Kaiza Cortus has taken the remains to build a new Duel Machine. This one has 3 special abilities. Its a humanoid Duel Machine, built such that it can be mistaken foe a female cousin of Kaiza. Like the machine it was built from, it also has the self learning and reliance program installed, salvaged from the hard disc of machina gearframe 000. As its last ability, almost an advancement of the soul disc summon ability, it is equipped with a card replication function. Where as the card summon function summons an illusion of the card, the card replication function makes the duel machine become the illusion of the card itself, for a short period, granting it control over the illusion. Whether this can harm only duel monsters, or can cause damage to other property, is unknown, and so far, Loruka is the only duel machine recorded to have this function.







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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:28 pm

Chapter 2: Test run

location: Unknown location in the forest, time: 9:00 am

a bunch of people with black capes and hoods can be seen surveying what appears to be a small building located deep in the forest. Looking well out of place, the building has a small door in the front, circular in shape and wide open. A short distance away, one of the black hooded persons walks off ahead

Soul Hacker 1: I will never forget the curse Enrion laid on us
Soul Hacker 1: and even in her absence, she still tortures us !
Soul Hacker 1: at least we were able to posses the people who found this, or we never would have, and even then,
Soul Hacker 1: she places a titanium alloy lock and encryption code on the safe, deep in a building, underground !
Soul Hacker 1: as if the front door encryption wasn't bad enou-

*suddenly, his disc activates, with a targeting laser pointing on it from the left, above*

Soul Hacker 1: what the -

*then, another laser, above from the right, targets it as well*

Soul Hacker 1: who goes there !
Unknown Person: well

*then, 2 figures jump out from the nearby trees at either side of him, landing on their knees, one is a male with white hair, and the other is a female, also with white hair*

Kaiza: thanks for letting us know what's going on

*the then get up on their feet and face the soul hacker*

Loruka: the body you are in possession of is not your own, please release it
Soul Hacker 1: hahahahahahaha
Kaiza: :S
Soul Hacker 1: you expect me to go back to the same prison I fought hard to get out of ?!

*the hacker locks back onto their discs, starting a duel*

Loruka: you were in that prison for a reason, the body you control isn't responsible
Loruka: but since you refuse to comply, the body will be reclaimed by force
Soul Hacker 1: you're welcome to try !
Soul Hacker 1: summon green gadget, and ill add red gadget to hand
Soul Hacker 1: set 2 cards face down (mirror force, bottomless trap hole) and end my turn
Loruka: ill go first
Kaiza: (thinking) it was agreed ill go first x_x
Loruka: ill activate heavy storm, destroying your two cards (mirror force, bottomless trap hole)
Loruka: now ill summon nova summoner, and attack
Loruka: both monsters get destroyed, so now nova summoner's effect activates, and ill special summon honest from my deck
Loruka: honest attacks (soul hacker 1's lp: 6900)
Soul Hacker 1: urgh, that's the best you can do ?!
Loruka: all duelists know that assaults take a setup time
Loruka: ill set 3 cards (mystical space typhoon, book of moon, miraculous descent) and ill end
Soul Hacker 1: well your time is up
Soul Hacker 1: ill activate mystical space typhoon on your face down card (mystical space typhoon)
Soul Hacker 1: now ill activate mind control, and take control of your monster
Soul Hacker 1: now ill summon red gadget, and add yellow gadget to my hand
Loruka: chain, book of moon, flipping red gadget face down
Soul Hacker 1: ..............
Soul Hacker 1: ill set 1 card (solemn warning) and end my turn, take it back
Loruka: thank you

*upon ending, the soul hacker presses a button beneath his disc, that flashes red after*

Kaiza: my turn, activate charge of the light brigade, and ill send the top 3 cards of my deck to the grave (ryko, lightsworn hunter, glow up bulb, mirror force) to add, lyla, lightsworn sorceress, from my deck to my hand)
Kaiza: now, ill summon lyla and,
Soul Hacker 1: not so fast !
Soul Hacker 1: chain, solemn warning, paying 2000 lp to negate the summon (soul hacker 1's lp: 4900)
Kaiza: well then

*Kaiza then pulls his soul trigger, making the duel a soul duel and surrounding him with a small white whirlwind*

Kaiza: activate monster reborn, and ill special summon nova summoner from the grave
Kaiza: now, ill use glow up bulb's effect, sending the top card of my deck to the grave (chaos sorcerer) to special summon it
Kaiza: synchro summon, honest, nova summoner and glow up bulb, to special summon trishula, dragon of the ice barrier, and ill remove 1 card from the field (red gadget), one from the grave (green gadget) and 1 from your hand (jinzo)
Soul Hacker 1: (thinking) a white aura ? since when ?
Kaiza: Trishula attacks (Soul Hacker 1's lp: 2200)
Soul Hacker 1: urghhhh !
Kaiza: ill set 1 card face down (mystical space typhoon)
Kaiza: your turn
Soul Hacker 1: you all aren't ordinary duelists.......... or ordinary humans.........
Loruka: to be correct, I'm -
Kaiza: no we aren't
Soul Hacker 1: heh
Soul Hacker 1: ill activate dark hole, and clear the field of monsters
Soul Hacker 1: ill set 2 cards face down (green gadget, ultimate offering) and end
Kaiza: on end phase, ill activate mystical space typhoon, destroying your face down card (ultimate offering)
Loruka: my turn
Loruka: ill remove from play nova summoner and honest from my grave, to special summon soul of purity and light
Loruka: now ill summon herald of orange light, and synchro summon soul of purity and light and herald of orange light, to special summon avenging knight parshath
Loruka: now, ill activate miraculous descent, and special summon honest from my grave
Avenging Knight Parshath attacks
Soul Hacker 1: ...................... (soul hacker 1's lp: 800)
Loruka: well, this is over from here, Honest attacks (Soul hacker 1's lp: 0)

*the last attack makes the hacker drops to his knees, and the duel ends*

Loruka: you wont have the body for much longer, so your most usable option is to return it
Soul Hacker 1: ................
Soul Hacker 1: you wont be around for much longer either
Kaiza: hmm ?

*with that, the coat and hood on the man vanishes in a black smoke, leaving a boy unconscious on the floor. But soon after, 2 more soul hackers, riding a cyber dragon each, barge out from the woods*

Kaiza: !!
Loruka: ................

*Loruka then places 2 cards on her duel disc and pulls the soul trigger, with 1 card face up, and another face down. Face up card is dimensional alchemist*

Kaiza: (thinking) how did they get here so fast ?!
Soul Hacker 2: he was right, there was an intruder
Soul Hacker 3: oh well, Cyber dragon, rush em !
Cyber Dragon 1: (roars loudly)

*the cyber dragon rushes Kaiza, but Loruka jumps in front and grabs it by its jaws before it reaches him*

Kaiza: loruka ?
Loruka: card replication, dimensional alchemist

*with those words, the dimensional alchemist and her duel disc starts to glow brightly, and her body becomes transformed slowly into that of dimensional alchemist itself*

Kaiza: it works ....

*with the new body, she then switches one of her arms with her foot, keeping the cyber dragon's mouth open and placing her hand to point into its mouth*

Loruka(dimensional alchemist): card activation, dimensional alchemist

*after saying that, her hands start to glow bright as well*

Loruka(dimensional alchemist): card activation, honest
Cyber Dragon !!
Soul Hacker 2: what the -

*the soul hacker jumps off as from loruka's hand, a beam fires into the mouth of the cyber dragon, blowing it up from the inside out*

Soul Hacker 3: (thinking) I know that humans can now summon illusions of duel monsters, but since when can they become it ?!
Soul Hacker 3: grrr, Cyber dragon, attack !

*The next cyber dragon then launches at her*

Loruka(diemsnional alchemist): card activation, enemy controller

*with that, a controller appears in her other hand, and she uses the extension to tangle the cyber dragon by the mouth, making it shake around wildly as he holds onto it, the shaking finally makes teh soul hacker fall off, and when it does, she pulls the cyber dragon towards her. When it reaches right up on her, she quickly moves to the side of its head and punches it while it was still coming to the ground, shattering its head and making it fly to the side by some nearby trees, lifeless and headless. Thoe body soon disappears after, and the soul hackers get up on their feet*

Soul Hacker 3: you all aren't -
Kaiza: ordinary ?
Loruka(dimensional alchemist): no
Loruka(dimensional alchemist) we are not

*with that, the dimensional alchemist also disappears, leaving behind loruka in her original state, who then locks onto a soul hacker's disc with her own. Kaiza does the same to the other soul hacker*

Loruka: your best option to defeat us is via a duel
Loruka: soul summons wont work

Soul Hacker 2: fine then

*the soul hacker then takes the cards off his disc, quickly places it in the deck slot and locks onto Loruka's disc. And the 3rd one does the same to Kaiza*

Kaiza: sure we can take them 1 on 1 each ?
Loruka: we will be perfectly fine master
Soul Hacker 2: master ?

*Loruka then quickly locks back onto his disc, starting a duel, and Kaiza does the same for the 3rd one*

Loruka: lets go
Soul Hacker whatever, servant or not you still fall here !
Loruka: well then, ill go
Loruka: ill set 2 cards (sangan, call of the haunted) and ill end my turn
Soul Hacker 2: ill go
Soul Hacker 2: ill summon cyber phoenix, and ill have it attack your monster
Loruka: activate effect, sangan
Loruka: allowing me to add a monster with 1500 attack or less from my deck, to my hand
Loruka: I add Dimensional Alchemist to hand
Soul Hacker 2: ill set 1 card (trap stun) and end my turn
Loruka: my turn
Loruka: ill summon Dimensional Alchemist, and ill attack your monster (soul hacker 2's lp: 7900)
Soul Hacker 2: activate Cyber Phoenix effect, I get to draw 1 card
Loruka: ill set 1 card (solemn warning) and ill end my turn
Soul Hacker: it ends here then
Soul Hacker 2: activate Dark hole, clearing the field of all monsters
Soul Hacker 2: now ill activate trap stun, negating the effects of all trap cards on the field
Loruka: chain, call of the haunted, reviving dimensional alchemist
Soul Hacker 2: it wont save you
Soul Hacker 2: ill summon cyber dragon zwei and ill reveal 1 spell card (power bond) to make its name cyber dragon
Soul Hacker 2: now ill activate power bond, and ill fuse cyber dragon on the field and cyber dragon from my hand, to special summon cyber twin dragon, on double attack effect
Soul Hacker 2: that card wont save you
Loruka: even if I am defeated I wont become a soul hacker due to what I am
Soul Hacker 2: what ?
Loruka: but while you are correct that dimensional alchemist will be destroyed, this will undo that scenario
Loruka: ill discard honest, which increases the attack of my monster, by the attack of yours, making you lose lifepoints equal to the new difference (Soul Hacker 2's lp: 6600)
Loruka: and when you end your turn, you lose lifepoints equal to your monster's original attack (Soul Hacker 2's lp: 3800)
Soul Hacker 2: grrrrr
Loruka: my turn
Loruka: ill activate dimensional alchemist effect, and banish the top card of my deck for 500 more attack (nova summoner)
Loruka: now, ill remove sangan and honest in my grave, to special summon chaos sorcerer
Soul Hacker 2:.....................
Loruka: this battle is over, time to return to your source of origin (Soul Hacker 2's lp: 0)

*the attack knocks teh soul hacker down to the floor a short distance away, and black smoke arises from his body, to reveal a knocked out young girl on the floor, probably in mid teens. At the same time Loruka's battle took place*

Kaiza: ill go
Kaiza: ill summon lyla, lightsworn sorceress, and ill end my turn, after sending 3 cards from my deck to the grave (mirror force, ryko, lightsworn hunter, sangan)
Soul Hacker 3: ill go
Soul Hacker 3: ill summon mechanical chaser, and ill have it attack your monster
Kaiza: damage step, ill discard honest to the grave, to boost my monster's attack by your monster's attack (Soul Hacker 3's lp: 6300)
Soul Hacker 3: well, ill end my turn
Kaiza: my turn
Kaiza: ill summon krebons, annd both lyla, lightsworn sorceress and krebons will attack (Soul Hacker 3's lp: 3400)
Soul Hacker 3: grah !
Kaiza: main phase 2, ill synchro summon lyla, lightsworn sorceress and krebons to summon tempest magician, with 1 counter
Kaiza: remove the counter to inflict 500 damage (Soul Hacker 3's lp: 2900)
Soul Hacker 3: you'll pay
Kaiza: hu
Kaiza: ill set 2 cards (torrential tribute, solemn warning) and ill end my turn
Soul Hacker 3: heh
Soul Hacker 3: ill activate mystical space typhoon, destroying your face down card (solemn warning)
Soul Hacker 3: now ill activate geartown, and ill summon black salvo to the field, and use his effect to special summon mechanical chaser from my grave
Soul Hacker 3: synchro summon using mechanical chaser and black salvo, ancient fairy dragon
Soul Hacker 3: now ill use his effect, and ill destroy geartown to recover 1000 lifepoints (Soul Hacker 3's lp: 3900)
Soul Hacker 3: geartown effect activates, and ill special summon ancient gear gajiltron dragon from my deck
Kaiza: chain, torrential tribute, clearing the field for us both
Soul Hacker 3: you got lucky ......
Soul Hacker 3: ill set 1 card (mirror force) and ill end my turn
Kaiza: my turn
Kaiza: ill remove from play ryo, lightsworn hunter, and krebons to special summon chaos sorcerer, and ill summon effect veiler to the field
Kaiza: synchro summon chaos sorcerer and effect veiler to special summon arcanite magician, 2 counters, 2000 attack for each
Kaiza: ill remove 1 counter to destroy your face down card (mirror force)
Kaiza: now, ill activate monster reborn, and ill special summon tempest magician
Kaiza: ill use her first effect, and discard my last 2 cards to place 2 counters on arcanite magician, making him 3400 attack
Kaiza: guess its over from here (Soul Hacker 3's lp: 0)

*the two attacks from kaiza's monsters merge together before they hit the soul hacker, leaving a small explosion that can be seen by the remaining soul hackers at the base*

Soul Hacker 4: what was that ?
Soul Hacker 5: most likely rokuta overdoing it again
Soul Hacker 5: still, be ready

*the soul hacker activates his disc*

Soul Hacker 5: never go easy on humans

*meanwhile, the battles are over and Loruka and Kaiza places the freed people to rest on a tree*

Kaiza: the blast most likely would have alerted all the other hackers something really is here
Loruka: dont worry master, a diversion is possible

*Loruka then places a smashing ground card on her duel disc, and a face down wall of revealing light*

Loruka: even if I am defeated I cannot be hacked, for I am a machine, not human
Kaiza: ....................
Loruka: you run ahead, and ill come from above and cause a distraction
Loruka: the main entrance should be open, run directly to it to enter inside
Kaiza: wait
Loruka: yes matser ?
Kaiza: (thinking) I need to fix that later, once we have a later -_-

*Kaiza then takes a device from his pocket and inserts the connector from it onto a connection socket underneath the duel disc*

Kaiza: its a new device

*he then presses a button on it, and it starts to emit a blue light*

Kaiza: when in a duel, this will disrupt other targeting lasers, meaning that no one can lock on to your disc after teh battle starts
Kaiza: the singularity duel device is what its called, it will help you
Loruka: thank you master
Kaiza: you're .......welcome D:
Kaiza: are you sure this plan will work
Loruka: 45% on positive results
Kaiza: D:
Kaiza: well, better than 0 I guess
Kaiza: countdown protocol, time duration, 25 seconds
Loruka: protocol active
Kaiza: lets do what we can

*with that, Kaiza runs off from Loruka's spot,, to where the soul hacker camp is, while Loruka counts down from 25 to 0. her body still, and her eyes flashing blue with every second, still blinking brightly in the daylight*

End of Chapter 2: Test run









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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Fri Oct 21, 2011 4:08 am

good so far keep up the work


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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Tue Nov 01, 2011 8:03 am

well, thanks

and I think ill have to conclude chapter 2 here before it gets too long D:







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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Wed Nov 02, 2011 7:52 pm

do what every you think needs to be done


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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Wed Nov 02, 2011 8:53 pm

nice article keep up good work Wink


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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Wed Nov 09, 2011 8:45 pm

Chapter 3: Liberation

Location: Unknown Location in the Forest, time: 9:20 am

in the cleared expanse of grass in the area surrounding the complex, 2 soul hackers sit on the floor playing with their own cards, their duel disc deactivated, while talking to each other

Soul Hacker 4: the 2 we sent to check up on the scout haven't reported back yet
Soul Hacker 5: Eh they're probably just being the fools they are again, taking their sweet time to finish up what they're doing
Kaiza: HEY !
Soul Hacker 4: what the ?!

*the soul hackers quickly place their cards back in their disc and see Kaiza, running towards them, leaving them all well confused*

Soul Hacker 4: heh, I thought what he was asking for is easier done through suicide
Loruka: countdown complete
Soul Hacker 4: huh ?

*in the sky above them, Loruka can be seen with her duel disc active, coming down right where the soul hackers are*

Loruka: card activation, smashing ground

*with that, her hand clenches to a fist and becomes covered in a thick gold layer as she descends to where the soul hackers are. The soul hackers jump out of the way before she lands on them, and as she lands, her hand hits the ground, causing a small tremor where they all are, as well as the ground around them to become broken up and raised above ground level. As Kaiza rushes up to where they are, he activates his soul trigger, and hops from 1 piece of unearthed chunk to the next, quickly going past Loruka and the soul hackers, disoriented from the impact, and dives into the entrance to the complex, rolling on the floor and quickly rebounding. Soon after the 2 soul hackers get up to see only Loruka, still in the same area where she made her landing*

Soul Hacker 4: Since when is a human capable of this ?!

*She then takes her duel disc and locks on the one of the hackers*

Loruka: I have many more functions I can perform
Soul Hacker 4: this will be your last one !

*the hacker then locks back onto her disc, starting a duel. almost immediately after, the other soul hacker tries to lock onto hers as well, but the lock doesn't apply*

Soul Hacker 5: what the -
Loruka: the duel has been singularized, 1 vs 1 only
Loruka: trying to join would be futile
Soul Hacker 4 and 5: .................
Soul Hacker 4: ill fight you myself then
Soul Hacker 5: Coruto, go take care of the other one who came
Soul Hacker 5: on it

*he then runs off to the entrance, while Loruka and the other hacker battle*

Soul Hacker 4: ill set 1 card (dekochi the battlechanted locomotive) and end my turn
Loruka: ill go, ill summon dimensional alchemist, and ill use his effect, removing the top card of my deck from play (sangan) for 500 more attack points
Loruka: Dimensional Alchemist attacks
Soul Hacker 4: flip, dekochi the battlechanted locomotive, and ill use his effect to draw 1 card
Loruka: ill set 1 card (solemn warning) and end my turn
Soul Hacker 4: heh
Soul Hacker 4: ill activate mystical space typhoon, destroying your face down card (solemn warning)
Soul Hacker 4: now ill summon black salvo, and use his effect to revive dekochi the battlechanted locomotive from my brave
Soul Hacker synchro summon, using dekochi the battlechanted locomotive and black salvo to summon karakuri boshido MDL 00 burei
Soul Hacker 4: ill then use his effect, and switch dimensional alchemist to defense mode
Soul Hacker 4: Karakuri Shogun attacks
Loruka: its destroyed, but that triggers his 2nd effect, and ill add sangan from my banished zone to my hand
Soul Hacker 4: ill set 1 card face down (mirror force) and end my turn
Loruka: my turn
Loruka: ill set 2 cards face down (sangan, call of the haunted) and end my turn
Soul Hacker 4: my turn, ill summon Mechanicalchaser to the field, and ill have it attack
Loruka: sangan effect activates, and ill add herald of orange light from my deck to my hand
Soul Hacker 4: no matter, karakura shogun attacks next
Loruka: flip, activate call of the haunted, and ill special summon dimensional alchemist from my grave
Loruka: do you still choose to attack ?
Soul Hacker 4: .................
Soul Hacker 4: yes
Loruka: well, in the damage step, ill discard honest from my hand, making my monster 1300 attack points stronger
Loruka: attacking was a worst case option (Soul Hacker 4's lp: 6700)
Soul Hacker 4: well then, ill end my turn
Soul Hacker 4: (thinking) honest is gone, her light monsters have no defense
Soul Hacker 4: (thinking) anything of strong attack points that she summons is victim to my trap
Soul Hacker 4: its your move
Loruka: I know
Loruka: ill remove sangan and honest from my grave, to special summon chaos sorcerer, in attack mode
Loruka: and ill use his effect to remove your mechanicalchaser from play
Soul Hacker 4: is that the best you can do ?
Loruka: no
Soul Hacker 4: ??
Loruka: now ill summon herald of orange light, and ill synchro summon using chaos sorcerer and herald of orange light, scrap dragon
Soul Hacker 4: ?!
Loruka: ill use his effect, destroying my call of the haunted and your face down card (mirror force)
Soul Hacker 4: !
Loruka: with call of the haunted destroyed, dimensional alchemist is destroyed too, and I get his effect, adding honest from my out of play zone to my hand
Loruka: scrap dragon attacks (Soul Hacker 4's lp: 3900)
Soul Hacker 4: urgh .....
Loruka: your turn
Soul Hacker 4: (thinking) damit .... who is this girl ?!
Soul Hacker 4: ill summon black salvo, and ill use his effect
Loruka: chain to effect, and ill discard herald of orange light and honest to negate its effect and destroy it .....
Soul Hacker 4: .....................
Soul Hacker 4: ill set 1 card face down (torrential tribute) and end my turn
Loruka: my turn
Loruka: ill set 1 card face down, and ill use scrap dragon's effect, destroying my face down card (dark mimic lv 3) and your face down (torrential tribute)
Soul Hacker 4: ........................
Soul Hacker 4: (thinking) there were reports of a white haired fairy deck user back in the past, who boasted ridiculous power enough to rival the existance of our kind..........
Loruka: and now, ill remove from play honest, herald of orange light, dimensional alchemist and dark mimic lv 3, to summon
Soul Hacker 4: (thinking) surely this cant be her
Loruka: sky scourge enrise
Soul Hacker 4: (thinking) then again ......
Loruka: this duel is over
Soul Hacker 4: you are stronger than I'd expect from any fairy user .....
Loruka: ?

*the same time he says that, the attacks from her monsters impact with the soul hacker, making the crater deeper and dropping his lifepoints to 0. When the dust clears, Loruka goes to the person who was taken control of, takes him out of the crater, and places him on level land close to the entrance of the complex*

Loruka: (processing) you are stronger than I'd expect from any fairy user .....
Loruka: .............
Loruka: ill process the query on an indefinite date

*with that, she heads into the complex after Kaiza. Meanwhile, Kaiza goes through the underground tunnel in the complex from the entrance. The complex itself looks well made, shiny all the way to the floor, but also well under used, as most of the lights in the complex are off, making vision hard. In the midst of the empty corridor, Kaiza hears some footsteps hurrying towards him*

Kaiza: Loruka ?
Soul Hacker 5: she's most likely gone by now
Kaiza: hu ...

*the soul hacker stops a short distance behind kaiza, and activates his duel disc, while Kaiza activates his and locks onto his as soon as he turns it on*

Soul Hacker 5: in a rush to join her ?
Kaiza: no, in a rush to send you with your friend ?
Soul Hacker 5: huh ?
Kaiza: your friend cant dispatch Loruka that easily, trust me
Kaiza: just as much ....

*Kaiza then turns around to face his opponent*

Kaiza: you cant dispatch me that easily either !
Soul Hacker 5: we'll see about that !

*the soul hacker locks onto Kaiza's disc and the duel starts

Kaiza: ill go first
Kaiza: ill set 2 cards face down (ryko, lightsworn hunter, mystical space typhoon) and end my turn
Soul Hacker 5: my turn !
Soul Hacker 5: ill summon masked dragon, and attack your monster
Kaiza: flip, ryko, lightsworn hunter, and ill destroy masked dragon while sending 3 cards from the top of my deck to the grave (d.d. warrior lady, mirror force, torrential tribute)
Soul Hacker 5: (thinking) his defenses are broken, by his own card effect, how pathetic
Soul Hacker 5: ill set 1 card face down (mirror force) and end my turn
Soul Hacker 5: (thinking) this should keep mine steady
Kaiza: on end phase, activate mystical space typhoon on your face down card
Soul Hacker 5: (thinking) or not
Kaiza: my turn
Kaiza: ill summon lyla, lightsworn sorceress, and ill have it attack (Soul Hacker 5's lp: 6300)
Kaiza: and ill end my turn, after sending another 3 cards (dark armed dragon, solemn warning, glow up bulb)
Soul Hacker 5: My turn then ....
Soul Hacker 5: ill summon cyberdark horn to the field in attack mode, and ill use his effect and equip masked dragon to it, giving it 1400 more attack points
Soul Hacker 5: CyberDark Horn attacks
Kaiza: damage step, ill discard honest to the grave
Kaiza: Your monster gained 1400 attack, my monster now gains 2200 (Soul Hacker 5's lp: 4600)
Soul Hacker 5: grrr
Kaiza: relax, your monster is still alive, and its still your turn
Soul Hacker 5: ill end my turn
Kaiza: ok then
Kaiza: my turn Very Happy
Kaiza: ill summon junk synchron, and special summon ryko, lightsworn hunter from my grave
Kaiza: synchro summon, using lyla, lightsworn sorceress, ryko, lightsworn hunter and junk synchron, trishula, dragon of the ice barrier
Kaiza: ill use his effect, and remove from play cyberdark horn, masked dragon from your grave, and 1 card from your hand (dark hole)
Kaiza: now, ill banish junk synchron and honest to special summon chaos sorcerer
Kaiza: have any battle faders, swift attacking scarecrow, or tragogedia ?
Soul Hacker 5: yes, why ?!
Kaiza: well Trishula attacks first (Soul Hacker 5's lp: 1900)
Soul Hacker 5: argh
Kaiza: guess it was a lie ......
Kaiza: now chaos sorcerer attacks (Soul Hacker 5's lp: 0)

*the last attack knocks the soul hacker to the floor, he struggles to get up but then simply stops moving, and a black sworl of smoke is released from his body, revealing a young boy, knocked out on the floor. Kaiza goes to the boy and places him to rest on one of the edges of the tunnel, and continues down his path*

Kaiza: sorry you came all this way for this

*a short distance into the tunnel, Kaiza hears more footsteps loudly in the empty tunnel, and turns around to check*

Kaiza: Loruka ?
Loruka: yes master ?
Kaiza: (sighs with relief) good to see you ok
Kaiza: (thinking) 1st recorded time hearing her call me master turns out to be good

*Loruka catches up and reaches where Kaiza is, and they both proceed through the tunnel*

Loruka: the soul hackers have all been removed from the stolen bodies, all that's left now is to get to the room at the end of the -

*before she could finish, she grabs Kaiza and jumps backwards. Very soon after, 2 rockets hit the ground where Kaiza was, leaving a big explosion that rattles the tunnel*

Kaiza: what the ?
Loruka: soul summon

*in the distance, a large robotic figure slowly steps out of the shadows to reveal what it is, a machina force. He fires another 2 rockets at them, and loruka bends he knees a bit. Then, from the sides of her hips, a compartment opens up and 2 small rockets fire out, colliding with machina force's own, destroying each other. As the explosion clears, Loruka quickly activates her duel disc and soul trigger, and plays a card on it*

Loruka: card activation, enemy controller

*with that, an extension cord fires out from her duel disc to the head of the machina force. She holds the cord with both hands and pulls it down to the ground, while they get on their feet*

Loruka: master, get past the Machina force and head to the main room, to determine the reason for the summon
Kaiza: but -
Loruka: with a civilian in crossfire I am not able to execute offensive tactics to delete the summon
Kaiza: ....
Kaiza: (thinking) she's right
Kaiza: ok

*Kaiza then runs towards the machina gearframe, and from behind, Loruka fires another 2 rockets, hitting the force in the head before Kaiza reaches, raising him off the ground, while tugging Loruka off the ground as well. as they raise off, Kaiza slides underneath him before he falls again, with the force only missing him by a hair as his blade hits the ground first*

Kaiza: (checking his hair and notices some cut hair strands) D:

*he gets off the floor and quickly runs to the room entrance, but as soon as he enters, the door closes behind him*

Kaiza: ?!

*he rushes back to the door to see if he can open it, but slumps to the ground when he finds none*

Kaiza: (sighs with despair)
Kaiza: guess ill be rebuilding her agai-
Kaiza: !
Kaiza: (thinking) if its a soul summon then its a soul hacker who did this, take the soul hacker out, Loruka is fine

*with that thought, Kaiza gets off the floor to continue down the tunnel, but realizes that this tunnel is a very short one, leading to a very huge and well illuminated room with a fairly large set of stairs at the end of the room. On top of the stairs, a girl in a black robe and purple hair can be seen sitting on the staircase, with a locked entrance behind her*

Kagami(hacked): finally
Kagami(hacked): what took you so long ?

*meanwhile, outside of the room in the tunnel, The Machina force fires another set of rockets at Loruka while she plays a card*

Loruka: card summon, marshmallon

* with that a marshmallon appears before the rockets hit, and she holds it by the head and stretches it across her body, using it to shield her from the attacks*

Loruka: .....
Loruka: card replication, dimensional alchemist

*with that, she lets the marshmallon go and she copies the image of dimensional alchemist onto herself, becoming the card itself. She then sets a card on her duel disc and waits as the monster fires another 2 rockets at her. Before they reach, she flips the card over*

Loruka: card activation, mirror force !

*Loruka then does a spin, as a transparent ball appears in her hand. After she completes 1 spin, she throws the ball in the middle of the spin, which then stretches out into a transparent wall spanning the entire cave. The wall moves forward to the machina force, hitting and destroying the rockets and eventually making contact with the Machina force. Meanwhile, in the final room, from the girl's disc on it begins to release some smoke, and she takes it off her duel disc and places it in her shirt*

Kagami(hacked): hmmmm

*she then gets up and starts walking slowly down the staircase towards Kaiza*

Kagami(hacked): you know, this tunnel, this complex, was created by our long lost enemy only 13 to 14 years ago
Kagami(hacked): its where she worked on special duel disc designed solely for battle against soul summons
Kagami(hacked): as at the time, humans could not do soul summons of their own
Kagami(hacked): even in her absence, she still blocked off any access to those secrets from us, so rather than try all day
Kagami(hacked): we decided we'll just capture anyone who came
Kagami(hacked): what surprises me is not only the fact you made it this far on your own, but you also have -

*before she could finish, an explosion occurs in the tunnel behind, releasing lots of smoke. From that smoke, a female figure holding something in her hands appear, and steps out of the smoke; Loruka, holding the head of the Machina force, which she drops to the floor*

Loruka: this belongs to you, but the body you control doesn't
Kagami(hacked): Impressive
Kaiza: and yes, I also have an aura just like your kind does
Kaiza: I dont know why, but I'm glad its here
Kagami(hacked): you also have a girlfriend too, how cute
Kaiza: (thinking) urgh >.<
Loruka: Master, definition needed for the term girlfriend
Kaiza: (thinking) x_x
Kaiza: uhhh, to be defined later, time duration, 5 hours
Loruka: query withheld
Kagami(hacked): what an awkward couple you two are

*she finally reaches the floor of the room where Kaiza and Loruka are, and activates her duel disc*

Kagami(hacked): your girlfriend calling you master (laughs hard)
Kagami(hacked): whatever, in the end there's a saying when it comes to killing animal groups
Kagami(hacked): dont leave orphans
Kagami(hacked): kill entire families !
Kaiza: you're welcome to try on this one !

*Kaiza and Loruka activate their own disc, and start a duel with the last hacker*

(end of chapter 3)







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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Thu Dec 08, 2011 6:53 am

finally resumed my story and finished chapter 3........almost lost my arms too x_x

Chapter 4: Recovery

Location: Last room of underground complex, time: 9:50 am

Kaiza: ill go first
Kaiza: ill set 2 cards face down (ryko, lightsworn hunter, solemn warning) and end my turn
Kagami(hacked): well then, lets see here
Loruka: .......
Kagami(hacked): ill summon to the field, machina peacekeeper, and ill have it attack your monster
Kaiza: (thinking) damn it !
Kaiza: flip, ryko, lightsworn hunter, and ill use his effect to destroy your monster, after sending 3 cards from my deck to the grave (lyla, lightsworn sorceress, heavy storm, emergency teleport)
Kagami(hacked): Nice but machina peacekeeper activates, and I get to add a union monster from my deck to my hand, ill add, machina gearframe from my deck to my hand
Kagami(hacked): now ill set 1 card (seven tools of the bandit) and end my turn ^_^
Loruka: my turn
Loruka: ill summon dimensional alchemist, and ill use his effect, banishing the top card of my deck (dark resonator) for 500 more attack points
Loruka: Dimensional Alchemist attacks (Kagami(hacked) lp: 6200)
Kagami(hacked): urgh, that felt kinda good Very Happy
Loruka: hmph
Loruka: ill set 1 card face down (mirror force) and end my turn
Kagami(hacked): Fine, my turn
Kagami(hacked): ill special summon to the field cyber dragon and ill summon green gadget to the field. Using his effect, ill add red gadget to my hand
Kagami(hacked): and since you hit me first ....
Kagami(hacked): Cyber dragon, attack, show no mercy on dimensional alchemist ! (Loruka's lp: 7200)
Loruka: alchemist's effect activates, and ill add dark resonator from my deck to my hand
Kagami(hacked): No matter, green gadget attacks (Loruka's lp: 5800)

*the attack from green gadget knocks her back a bit, and while she keeps her ground, on her right arm and left leg, a small gash can be seen on each, with a small bit of sparks coming out from it*

Kaiza: Loruka ?
Kagami(hacked): interesting ....
Loruka: ................ ill be fine
Loruka: its your turn
Kagami(hacked): well, then, main phase 2, since I dont want you all doing it to me a bit harder than I can tolerate, ill do myself
Kagami(hacked): contact fuse, cyber dragon and green gadget to summon chimeratech fortress dragon
Kagami(hacked): and ill end my turn
Kaiza: my turn then
Kaiza: ill summon junk synchron, and use his effect, to special summon ryko, lightsworn hunter from my grave
Kaiza: synchro summon using ryko, lightsworn hunter and junk synchron, to summon junk warrior on 2300 attack
Kaiza: junk warrior attacks chimeratech fortress dragon (Kagami(hacked) lp: 5900)
Kaiza: ill end my turn there
Kagami(hacked): (laughs a bit) well then, here we go
Kagami(hacked): ill summon to the field machina gearframe, and activates his effe-
Kaiza: chain, solemn warning, paying 2000 lifepoints to negate the summon (Kaiza's lp: 6000)
Kagami(hacked): chain, seven tools of the bandit, paying 1000 lifepoints to negate your trap card (Kagami(hacked) lp: 4900)
Kaiza: grrr
Kagami(hacked): now, as I was saying, ill use machina gearframe's effect, and ill add machina fortress from my deck to my hand
Kagami(hacked): now ill discard 2 machina fortresses, to special summon machina fortress from my grave
Kagami(hacked): now, where were we ..... oh yea !
Kagami(hacked): Machina Gearframe attacks Loruka (Loruka's lp: 4000)

*the rockets fired from machina gearframe impact on Loruka and leave a small explosion. When the dust clears, Loruka is still standing, but struggling a bit. The gashes on her hand and leg are wider, and more sparks are being released, and there is a new small gash on her forehead. One can see Loruka straining to stand up, as well as keep her body calm*

Kagami(hacked): very interesting ........ oh well
Kagami(hacked): Machina Fortress attacks Junk Warrior
Loruka: chain................Mirror force...........destroying all targets in attack mode...........that you control
Kaiza: (thinking) huh ?
Kagami(hacked): very interesting indeed ....
Kagami(hacked): you're playing to keep him safe.............how noble of you (chuckles a bit)
Kagami(hacked): well ill end my turn
Loruka: my.............turn
Loruka: summon..............dark resonator..........and..........attack (Kagami(hacked) lp: 3600)
Kagami(hacked): urgh, I better watch myself a bit here ............. as for you
Kagami(hacked): struggling pretty hard aren't you ?
Loruka: you shou;d not.........be concerned with.........me........set 1 card face...........down..............turn end

*with each breath, Loruka's movement and stance becomes more laboured as the sparks continue to fly from her body*

Kaiza: .........
Kagami(hacked): its funny..................you dont care about yourself yet you care about him (activates dark hole)
Kagami(hacked): but, do you think (summons red gadget, adds green gadget to hand)
Kagami(hacked): he will even care if you fall ? (discards machina cannon, special summons machina fortress from grave)
Kagami(hacked): Machina Fortress attacks Loruka (loruka's lp: 1500)

*the attack drops Loruka down to one knee, her eyes become heavy and multiple scars and gashes can be seen across her body, releasing sparks everywhere*

Kagami(hacked): and red gadget attacks Kaiza
Loruka:(struggling to speak) chain..............book of...........book......book of..........moon
Loruka:(struggling to speak) tar..........get.....................re....re.....red..........gadget
Kagami(hacked): and why did I expect that so much ?
Kagami(hacked): I know what you are now Loruka, if that is what he calls you
Kagami(hacked): you're a machine, a simple, disposable machine just like all that I have here.
Kagami(hacked): if you break, you'll be repaired when they feel like it, or simply thrown away and replaced
Kagami(hacked): you're here willing to die for the scum that is called the human race, all for nothing !
Kaiza: ..............
Kaiza: no, she's not dying today ........
Loruka: mas....ter ........?
Kagami(hacked): hmm ?
Kagami(hacked): and what do you plan to -
Kaiza: do you end your turn or not ?!
Kagami(hacked): why yes
Kagami(hacked): Problem ? troll2
Kaiza: yes
Kagami(hacked): huh ?

*Kaiza goes and pulls the soul trigger on his disc, engulfing him in a white whirlwind that blows fiercely across the room while loruka, on all fours, looks on, incapable of even standing up. The whirlwind frightens Kagami, who backs away a bit*

Kagami(hacked): what the
Kagami(hacked): what the hell are you ?!
Kaiza: dont mistake me for someone who treats people like trash !(activates dark hole)
Kaiza: and Loruka is more than just some machine !
Kagami(hacked): (shivers in fear a bit)
Kaiza: she saved the lives of my friends ! (3 dark confirmed in the graveyard, special summons dark armed dragon)(wind gets more intense, causing a strong gust in the room, almost blowing Kagami away)
Kaiza: you'll be the last thing that ever takes her ! (summons honest)
Kaiza: dark armed dragon, honest, attack, send her back where she belongs ! (Kagami(hacked) lp: 0)

*the attacks leave a huge explosion in fromt of Kaiza and Loruka. Kaiza shields his face as the explosion actually fights the whirlwind, while Loruka is simply too weak to react. When the explosion blast and dust finally clears, Kagami is seen on her knees, watching at them with a dazed look*

Kagami(hacked): what in...........what in the world.........
Kagami(hacked): what in the world....are you two ........

*with that, she collapses, and drops to the floor. Soon after, a black, thick puff of smoke swirls around her body rapidly, then disappears, and Kaiza takes off his soul trigger, and the white whirlwind dies down*

Loruka: task.............compl.......ete

*with that, Loruka collapses, and falls flat to the floor, sparks flying wildly from her body. Kaiza goes to her and turns her over, and lifts her head a bit*

Kaiza: dont place ant further effort into motor movement, shut all down
Kaiza: actiavte protocol, stasis recovery
Loruka: protocol...............act......ivate

*with that, Loruka closes her eyes and the sparks flying from the crevices made in her body start to fly out of her less. Kaiza picks her off the floor and carries her out of the tunnel, out of the complex and outside onto the field, back to the point where their first battle occurred. There, he places her to lean on a tree, folds her arms together and leaves her there

Kaiza: (thinking) I cant let the people see her like this, they'll be like what the (censored)
Kaiza: (thinking) she will recover, that's for sure, and by now everyone should be getting up, I best go check

*Kaiza walks off, Leaving Loruka to recover. As time passes, the crevices in her body start to shrink, and her lifepoints slowly raises as the crevices disappear and the sparks stop*

Location: Last room of underground complex, time: 10:15 am

Kagami: wahoo !!!
Kagami: thank you so much !!

*Kagami then goes and tackle hugs Kaiza, making him really baffled*

Kaiza: uhhh, maybe that's not the best of ideas ..........
Kagami: why not ? I see nothing wrong Shocked
Kaiza: uhhhh

*Kaiza then points to the other members of the team he and Loruka freed, all staring at them*

Kagami: oh (laughs weakly) sorry Very Happy

*she then lets go of him, makes a carefree spin and stops a short distance in front of him*

Kagami: so what brought you here ?
Kaiza: a distress called was sent from here and was received by FK, who then sent me to go deal with it
Kagami: you alone Shocked
Kagami: wow you must be good Very Happy
Kaiza: uhhh, not really, my partner, she is waiting outside, making sure no one comes
Kaiza: by the way, which team is this
Kagami: uhhh
AE member 1: team AE, run by KingWolfy
Kaiza: team AE huh ....

*flashback*

Location: AE Campsite, time: 3:00 pm

KingWolfy: (clears throat)
KingWolfy: so tell me
KingWolfy: what is the status of the soul infection, and what are members of FK doing here ?
Kaiza and Kessiler: you called for backup, that's why
Kessiler: uhh, and the soul infection was done by a soul hacker entity, its been taken care of
KingWolfy: very well, and let me rephrase
KingWolfy: what are THESE members of FK doing here ?
Xanxus: hmm ?
Kaiza and Anna: what ?
KingWolfy: snakedoc must really be losing it now.
KingWolfy: first, I know the entire rigistry of FK, and I know, that if Anna and Kaiza are members of FK, they're new members
KingWolfy: you dont send new members to deal with soul hackers of this degree
KingWolfy: secondly, this is a man's war, you dont send little Kids to such events

*Kingwolfy points to Anna*

Anna: >_<
KingWolfy: thirdly, 3 men, wait my bad, 2 men and a child, to deal with a soul hacker entity ?
Kingwolfy: I need to have a talk with Snakedoc after this
Kaiza: (mind crashes)
Kaiza: (mind reboots)
Xanxus: well, if you'd -
Kaiza: what was your name again ?
KingWolfy: hm ?
Kaiza: was it (censored)wolfy or (censored)wolfy ? I cant remember
KingWolfy: its KING WOLFY
Kaiza: ok, so we'll go with (censored)wolfy then
Kaiza: if it wasn't for this group of 3, wait, my bad, 2 men and 1 child, want to know where your group, my bad, entire group would be ?
Kaiza: all of you would be soul hacked
Kaiza: how many of you there have light decks ?
Kingwolfy's group: uhhh ....
Kaiza: right, none
Kaiza: want to know something, the entity could only be damaged by light monsters, which, Anna here seems to do well with
Kaiza: as for me, I have 2 chaos decks, one with more light than dark, hence why I'm here
Kaiza: so (censored)wolfy

*Kaiza turns his back to face him, bends a bit, pointing his butt towards him*

Kaiza: do like a real wolf

*Kaiza then spanks his own butt a bit*

Kaiza: and bite my wolfy !

*flashback ends*

Kaiza: (thinking) so, I'm saving his team again ..............
Kaiza: (thinking) argh >_<

*while Kaiza is thinking, he doesn't notice Kagami approaching him. She clenches her fist, and knocks Kaiza's head lightly with her knuckles*

Kagami: you there ?
Kaiza: Shocked
Kaiza: sorry was thinking
Kagami: Very Happy
Kaiza: anyway, I need to go check up on my partner, make sure she is ok ?
Kagami: its a she ?
Kaiza: yes
Kagami: then I must see her Very Happy
Kaiza: uhh, sure
Kaiza: (thinking) this girl scares me a bit
Kaiza: anyway, be right back

*with that, Kaiza heads back out to Loruka's location*

Location: entry point, time: 10:20 am

*Kaiza reaches the location where he left Loruka and is a bit shocked by what he sees; On Loruka, all sparks and crevices on her body made from the duel are gone and her body appears as if it is sleeping. Suddenly, her body jolts, startling kaiza a bit as she gets up, stands upright and opens her eyes to face him*

Kaiza: uhhhhh
Loruka: stasis recovery process complete, resuming previous state
Loruka: .........
Kaiza: ..........
Loruka: hello Master
Kaiza: (mind crashes and reboots)
Loruka: any further assignments
Kaiza: (thinking) stasis recovery is a success...........
Kaiza: uhh, no further assignments, just follow me

*with that, Kaiza and Loruka walk off to the complex side by side*

(end of chapter 4)










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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Thu Jan 05, 2012 10:13 am

Chapter 5: ADA test run

location: Kaiza's apartment, time: 4:00 am

*flashback*

Location: ADA ruins, time: 4:00 pm, year, 2138

Kaiza regains consciousness and gets off the ground, rising to stand upright to see the sky. Its mid afternoon, and the sky is orange from the setting sun. Then, in the distance, in the ground below the elevated land he is on, he seems the ruins of what seems to be a big complex, and, at the peak of the ruins, he sees what appears to be a purple dragon with a silver skull helmet and green and orange scales at its belly. The dragon kicks off the ruins and flies into the air, and then, curls itself into a ball hovering over the ruins. His body then starts to glow purple, until all that can be seen of it is a purple sphere hovering over the ground. Then, the ball explosively expands, rapidly engulfing everything in its path until it just reaches Kaiza*

*flashback ends*

*with that nightmare, Kaiza quickly awakens, scared beyond measure and gasping for air. In response, Loruka awakens from her own rest, and gets off her chair and walks towards Kaiza's bed*

Loruka: what is the situation Master ?
Kaiza: (panting) I'm..............I'm fine.......just a bad dream
Loruka: definition needed for dream
Kaiza: -_-
Kaiza: (thinking) I need to fix her memory data...... stupid me -_-
Kaiza: ill explain today, later, for now, lets go back and...........temporary deactivat-

*before eh cound finish, his phone rings, and he stretches to answer it*

Kaiza: hello ?
Snakedoc:(over the phone) hey, is this Kaiza ?
Kaiza: yes ?
Snakedoc:(over the phone) hey, I kinda need your help
Kaiza: what's wrong ?
Snakedoc:(over the phone) testing for new members to ADA is today at 9 pm, and we need 2 more testers, as Wilber is grounded, again
Kaiza:
Kaiza: I guess you want me to help .........
Snakedoc:(over the phone) ......................
Snakedoc:(over the phone) yes
Kaiza: (sighs) ok, ill get to it
Snakedoc:(over the phone) also, bring Loruka as the 2nd tester
Kaiza: Loruka ?
Snakedoc:(over the phone) she's a duel machine right ?
Kaiza: yes but -
Snakedoc:(over the phone) then she'll be perfect for tester duties
Kaiza: dont you have other duel machines ?
Snakedoc:(over the phone) yes but machina -
Kaiza: (frantically) ok ok ill take her !

*he then hangs up the phone and sighs*

Loruka: that was snakedoc, and you seem worried, what is wrong ?
Kaiza: uhh, nothing, sorry
Kaiza: here, lets go deactivate, we have a few small tasks to do tomorrow
Loruka: ok master
Kaiza: (thinking) wish she'd stop calling me that ....

*with that, Loruka sits back on her chair, closes her eyes and powers down, and Kaiza wraps himself back up in a blanket*

Kaiza: (thinking) Loruka doesn't know that she is the reincarnate of machina gearframe 001, I have no idea what she'll do if she finds out
Kaiza: (thinking) and these awful dreams, what are they for?
Kaiza: (thinking)(sighs) 1 task at a time, and
Kaiza: (thinking) with Loruka's data issue...........I'm in for 1 awkward day ...... =.=

*with those final thoughts, Kaiza slumps back to sleep*

*4 hours later*

Location: ADA entrance hall, time: 8:00 am

3 desks can be seen in the hall with people lined up in front of them. At one desk is alice_k, another has Kaiza, and at the 3rd desk, Norton Security. At Kaiza's desk, as he finishes signing 1 paper, a girl with purple hair and a black top comes and leans over his desk ater*

Kaiza: ???
Kagami; well dont we keep bouncing into each other
Kaiza: hmmmmm

*flashback*


Kagami: wahoo !!!
Kagami: thank you so much !!

*Kagami then goes and tackle hugs Kaiza, making him really baffled*

Kaiza: uhhh, maybe that's not the best of ideas ..........
Kagami: why not ? I see nothing wrong
Kaiza: uhhhh

*Kaiza then points to the other members of the team he and Loruka freed, all staring at them*

Kagami: oh (laughs weakly) sorry

*flashback ends*

Kaiza: (thinking) ah (censored)
Kaiza: well, I remember you, and hi (smiling with an unsure look on his face)
Kagami: hi
Kagama: sooooo, you're ADA's tester and a member of team FK ?
Kaiza: well, sort of
Kagami: wow you must really be great
Kaiza: D:
Kaiza: I'm not that great ....
Kagami: dont lie to myself and others you sa-helped my team alot
Kaiza: D:
Kaiza: well, for now lets focus on the registration process (laughs softly and weakly)
Kagami: oh, sorry

*Kaiza then gives her a form and a pen, and she begins to sign it, meanwhile, at Norton's security's desk, a guy with hair spiked upwards and black shades stops off at his desk*

Norton Security: Tiese ?
Tiese: well look at this
Tiese: ADA tester now ?
Norton Security: no man, actually I'm an admin here
Tiese: sweet
Norton Security: so what brings you back here ?
Tiese: well, you know, I was bored and I missed the girls here, so of course I'd come back
Norton Security: well in that case, let me tell you who to look for and who to avoid

*Norton then hands tiese a paper while talking to him as he fills it out. At alice's desk, a guy with brown hair and a white shirt and long pants stops at her desk*

Xanxus: from slifer to tester now ?
Alice: hmm ?
Xanxus: wow you improved alot
Alice: wow, you're back !
Alice: and, thanks
Alice: I'm actually an assistant, still in slifer though ....
Xanxus: oh .........
Alice: but that's because I never took a retest,, even though I could
Xanxus: well I'm sure you'd do perfect
Alice: so what brings you back ?
Xanxus: I missed the members here, I cant stay away forever
Alice: aww
Alcie: well, here, lets get you a good welcoming

*with that, alice hands him a paper for him to sign*

*A few moments later, while Kaiza decided to use a lolipop as a snack and shades to keep the sun at bay, a girl with brown hair, a blue denim jacket and jeans, stoops at his desk, slamming her hand on the desk and making it shake violently, startling Kaiza, who takes the shades off*

Kessiler: those are some fugly shades you have !
Kaiza:
Kaiza: well, welcome .....
Kessiler: and they placed you as a tester ?
Kessiler: they must have really run low on decent staff, expected of snake -_-
Kaiza: that was rude .....
Kessiler: its expected
Kessiler: now what do I have to do to sign up ?
Kaiza: well

*Kaiza takes a paper and slides it towards kessiler's hand*

Kaiza: sign this
Kessiler: ok, and

*she then holds the lolipop by the handle, pulls it out of Kaiza's mouth quickly and in the same instance, tosses it towards a wall, where it hits it and shatters into dust*

Kessiler: lolipops are for girls !
Kaiza: (thinking) urgh ....

*meanwhile, at Alice's desk, a guy with a red jacket, wildly combed hair and a black pants stops off at her desk*

Alice: hi, welcome to ADA
Aluuuuuuuuuuuuuu: well, hello there

*before she can hand him a paper*

Aluuuuuuuuuuuuuu: say I know you !
Alice: you do ?
Aluuuuuuuuuuuuuu: yea, I saw your porn video before
Alice: what ?
Aluuuuuuuuuuuuuu: yea, and you were kinda ugly
Alice: I see....

*Alice glares at him, then, her pupils stray towards a stack of papers. Before Aluuuuuuuuuuuuuuu could even think, she grabs and hits him with the full stack to the head, sending him to the floor and scattering papers everywhere*

Alice: while you're there take a paper and sign it !

*the action leaves everyone in the line, and Kaiza, in shock*

Kaiza: Shocked
Kessiler: I like her >_>

*at the same time, a bunch of members who finished register stop at the entrance for the ruling test, looking at loruka. She's holding a poster marked "rulings test" with an arrow pointing towards the door. At the same time, she is so still that her eyes aren't even blinking*

Blanton: wow, I expected mannequins to do this job but
Blanton: this mannequin almost looks like a human
Brarragan: but its perfectly still
Brarragan: how could they ma-
Loruka: definition on Mannequin needed
Brarragan: what the !

*the sudden response from Loruka makes everyone near her scamper to the floor away from her, completely shocked*

Kessiler: (laughs out loudly)
Kaiza: (sighs)

* few moments later, when registration is done, and testing for rulings begin, Kaiza, finishing his ruling test early, passes through the corridors on his way to the arena, and stops at the door for Loruka's testing room, and peers through, in the room, a group of members are being handed papers to by Loruka as she passes their desk*

Eraser: aren't you a little young to be a tester
Loruka: sorry, but the original tester is away. I'm a substitute tester
Eraser: ok then

*eraser turns to the left and sees a small kid*

Eraser: hey
Anna: uhh, hi, good luck

*eraser turns to the right and sees a machina gearframe*

Machina Gearframe: welcome
Eraser: what the ----

*outside by the door*

Kaiza: well, this is Loruka's first time hosting a test, lets see how she does

*flashback*

location: ADA ruling test room, year: 2134, time: 12:45 pm

Machina Gearframe(robot): welcome
Kaiza: ....................................................
Kaiza: (mind crashes)
Kaiza: (mind reboots)

*Kaiza raises his hand*

Kaiza: Alice ?
Alice: yes

*points towards the machina gearframe*

Kaiza: what the hell is that ?

*flashback ends*

Kaiza: (thinking) that never gets old -_-
Kaiza: (sighs)

*with that, he continues his way to the duel arena*

Location: ADA duel arena, time: 11:00 am

*Kaiza is standing at the edge of the arena, while watching on a group of people sitting down on the arena floor, all of which look impatient*

Kagami: key Kaizy
Kaiza: its Kaiza
Kagami: sorry, its my new name for you
Kagami: when does this test begin !
Kaiza: wait !
Blanton: but we've been here for what feels like hours
Kaiza: its only been 30 minutes !
Valerie: as a new member of this academy I find the test-
Kaiza: YOU, BE QUIET !
Valerie: ...........

*a brief bit of silence passes, then a member puts their hand up*

Kaiza: what do you need
Brarragan: how much longer Shocked
Kaiza: (facepalms himself in frustration) urgh !

*soon after, from the 2 entrances alice_k and loruka walk in with some people coming behind them*

alice: is everyone here ?
Kaiza: yes, we finished our rulings test pretty early
alice: good, now its the duel test
alice: Kaiza, you and your members sit on the left side of the stadium seats, mine will sit in the middle, Loruka's will sit on the right side
Kaiza: ok and who does the duel testing
alice: we do, hence why I separated our testees
alice: ill duel my members, and you'll duel yours, same for loruka's
Kaiza: (thinking) I didnt sign up for this ....
Kaiza: ok, so who starts ?
alice: well....
Loruka: ill commence the event
alice: uhh, sure then, now, just pick a member from your group and ...
Eraser: ill go
alice: or just do that ...
Loruka: its official
Loruka: (louder voice) everyone else head to your designated seats !
Brarragan2: wait, just 1 question
Kaiza and alice: hm ?
Brarragan: if we're to sit on the stadium chairs, why did Kaiza make us sit on the floor ?
Kaiza: uhhhhh
Valerie: ill have to file a complaint to the head admin for this
Kaiza: ~_~

*a short moment later, after everyone else is seated, Eraser and Loruka prepare to duel in the stadium, with Kaiza watching from the stadium head, and Valerie and Brarragan watching with binoculars at her hand*

Kaiza: (thinking) I wonder how that system would work

*flashback*

location: Kaiza's room, time: 1:00 am

Kaiza can be seen in front of a computer, buring a series of files to a CD, on a chair nearby is internal skeleton of a humanoid machine, with a disc slot open on top of its head. Only the head component is active*

Kaiza: (thinking) Machina Gearframe was one of the most skilled duelists known, despite the fact he was a machine
Kaiza: (thinking) but ill have to limit some of that skill when it comes to humans

*the data is finished burning to the CD and the CD is ejected, and Kaiza takes the disc and and places it on the disc slot for the machine, closing the drive*

Kaiza: (thinking) hopefully this works

*flashback ends*

Loruka: ill be taking 1st turn plays this match
Eraser: sure, go on ahead
Loruka: ok
Loruka: (processing) target human
Loruka: (processing) duel type: test duel
Loruka: (processing) activate protocol: selective misplay
Loruka: ill set 1 card face down (dark resonator) and end my turn
Eraser: ok then, lets see
Eraser: ill also set 1 card (gravekeeper's spy) and end my turn
Loruka: my turn
Loruka: ill flip summon dark resonator and summon sangan to the field, and now, ill synchro summon, using sangan and dark resonator, brionac, dragon of the ice barrier.
Loruka: sangan effect activate. add herald of orange light from my deck to my hand

*from the arena seats, Kaiza watches on while alice_k spies on Loruka's hand with binoculars*

Kaiza: (thinking) if he doesn't have spell and traps brionac alone can beat him
Kaiza: (thinking) I wonder ....
Alice_k: (eyes fixate on one card)(thinking) is that ?
alice_k: (thinking) oh crap ....

*meanwhile*

Loruka: (processing)
Loruka: (processing)
Loruka: (processing complete)
Loruka: Brionac attacks your face down monster
Eraser: flip, gravekeeper's spy, and ill use his effect, to special summon gravekeeper's guard in defense mode
Loruka: ok, ill set 1 card (solemn warning) then ill end my turn
Eraser: my turn, ill tribute gravekeeper's spy to sumon raiza the storm monarch, and use his effect to target brionac, dragon of the ice barrier
Loruka: chain, herald of orange light, discarding it and archlord kristya to negate his effect and destroy him
Eraser: hm, expected as much, well then ...
Loruka: hm ?
Eraser: ill banish gravekeeper's spy and raiza the storm monarch from my grave to special summon dark simorgh
Loruka: chain to summon, solemn warning, paying 2000 lifepoints to negate his summon and destroy him (Loruka's lp: 6000)
Eraser: alright, ill set 1 card (mirror force) and end my turn
Alice_k: (thinking) impressive ..... but why kristya ?
Loruka: my turn. Ill discard honest from my hand for brionac's effect, and return your face down card to your hand
Loruka: now ill activate monster reborn
Alice_k: (thinking) that's why ....
Loruka: and special summon dark simorgh from your grave
Alice_k: Shocked
Loruka: now, ill banish honest, archlord kristya, sangan and herald of orange light, to summon sky scourge enrise
Alice_k: Shocked !
Loruka: and now ill summon dimensional alchemist
Eraser: oh dear ....
Kaiza: (thinking) that selective misplay code sure wasn't enough ..... she only did minor misplays
Loruka: all out attack, go ! (Eraser's lp: 0)

*with the smoke from the attacks gone, the holograms disappear and the duel ends*

Eraser: well, guess that went badly.........
Loruka: we still have another duel to perform. The results are still imcomplete

*with that she reactivates her disc and locks on to Eraser's own*

Loruka: this time you go first
Eraser: will then, lets start

Alice_k: (thinking) what possessed her to banish kristya for that ? Shocked

Location: ADA duel arena, time: 11:30 am

*Loruka vs Eraser, duel 2, turn 7*

Eraser: now, dark simorgh and Caius the Shadow monarch attacks (Loruka's lp:0)
Loruka: one last round is left then
Kaiza: (thinking) hmmmm

Location: ADA Duel Arena, time: 11:40 am

*Eraser vs Loruka, turn 9*

Loruka: now, Chaos Archfiend king attacks your caius the shadow monarch, making its attack 1000 (Eraser's lp: 2000)
Loruka: now, sky scourge enrise attacks (Eraser's lp: 0)
Eraser: hu, nice ...
Loruka: my test for you is done, ill tabulate the results and perform the test with the next person who -

*before she could finish, someone raises their hand up and shouts out from the arena seats*

Tiese: me !

Alice_K: she's kinda cold ...
Kaiza: a bit, but she's new to all this, she's just following proceedure
Alice_K: yea, but she's like a machine ....
Kaiza: (thinking) if only you knew ....

Location: ADA duel arena, time: 12:45 pm

*Kaiza vs Kessiler, round 1, turn 14*

Kessiler: really know ?
Kessiler: this ?!
Kessiler: ill activate smashing ground to destroy your junk warrior, and ill tribute spirit reaper to summon vanity's fiend
Kessiler: take that rubbish deck out ! (Kaiza's lp: 0)
Kaiza: (sighs)

Location: ADA duel arena, time: 1:15 pm

*Kaiza vs Kessiler, round 3, turn 16*

Kaiza: scrap dragon attacks
Kessiler: get rid of it please (activates compulsory evacuation device)
Kaiza: chain, solemn judgment, paying 1/2 of my lifepoints to negate it (Kaiza's lp: 1200)
Kessiler: ........................ (Kessiler's lp: 0)
Kaiza: guess its over

Location: ADA Duel Arena, time: 4:00 pm

*Loruka vs Anna, round 2, turn 5*

Anna: (shaking) ill set 1 card face down .............. (vylon stella) and end I guess.........
Loruka: thinking
Loruka: (processing)
Loruka: (processing)
Loruka: (processing)(smoke starts coming from her hair)

*from the arena seats, Kaiza notices smoke coming from the top of Loruka's body*

Kaiza: (thinking) not good ...
Kaiza: Loruka, Anna, wait a bit !
Anna: huh ?
Loruka: what is the problem ?

*Kaiza then quickly scuttles down towards the arena where Loruka is, comes up to Loruka, holds her by her neck, pulls her head close to his and whispers in her ear*

Loruka: mas-
Kaiza: (whispering voice) system volume, 10%, time duration, 30 seconds
Loruka: (whispering voice) command complete
Kaiza: (whispering voice) cancel command, selective misplay
Loruka: (whispering voice) command canceled
Kaiza: (whispering voice) resume duel, social mode
Loruka: (whispering voice) command accepted

*with that, Kaiza lets her go and steps back*

Alice_k: what was that for ?
Kaiza: was just clearing up some confusion, that's all Very Happy
Brarragan: really ? it look like you were kissing her Very Happy
Kaiza: (thinking) urgh >_<
Kaiza: (mind crashes)
Kaiza: (mind reboots)
Kaiza:.......................
Kaiza: I wont answer that.............

*with that, Kaiza slowly walks back up the stairs with his head down*

Kaiza: (thinking) there shall be no room in the obelisk dorm with your name on it ...............

*he then stops at a chair and slumps onto it, face palming himself*

Loruka: do we resume the duel
Kaiza: yes .....
Loruka: ok then
Anna: (thinking) eep
Loruka: ill tribute my facedown herald of orange light to summon caius the shadow monarch, and use his effect to banish your face down card (vylon stella)
Anna: .................
Loruka: now ill activate monster reborn, and special summon dimensional alchemist from my grave
Loruka: now ill use his effect, and banish the top card of my deck for 500 more attack points (gorz the emissary of darkness)
Loruka: now ill remove from play nova summoner, herald of orange light, honest and sangan, to special summon sky scourge enrise
Loruka: all out attack, go ! (Anna's lp: 0)

*the attacks collide at her at once, causing an explosion and a huge cloud of smoke. When the smoke clears, Anna can be seen on her knees, staring into space and disoriented*

Anna: (thinking) what was I doing .......
Loruka: this test is over
Kaiza: (sighs)
Kaiza: (thinking) and you did so much better than this long ago ....


*Location: ADA entrance Hall, time: 5:30 pm*

*Kaiza has a stack of papers in his 2 hands and is carrying them to a room in the main entrance hall. While outside, a girl with black hair and glasses can be seen running towards the entrance. The entire building, almost the entire complex, seems empty*

Kaiza: well, at least the testing is over
Kaiza: (thinking) ill check up on Loruka soon, see how she-
Kaiza: hm ?

*in the distance, Kaiza can see the girl darting towards the entrance door for ADA, and he places the stack of paper down on the floor to see what is going on. Upon reaching the entrance, he places his hand out, and the girl stops a short distance in front of him and holds her legs, panting hard*

Kaiza: easy girl, what's wrong ?
Marie: (panting)
Kaiza: take your time, catch your breath

*Kaiza goes to place his hand on her back to help her, but she reacts quickly and stands upright, still panting, but panting less*

Marie: (panting) its inappropriate to touch a woman you do not know
Kaiza: ................sorry then ..........
Kaiza: nonetheless you're here for something so what is it ?
Marie: (panting stops)
Marie: my name is Marie and I am here to request a test for ADA
Kaiza: you're pretty late for that ..... you have to wait until next week
Marie: but its rude to keep a girl waiting that long, especially when they had to run such a long distance here !
Kaiza: ..........................
Kaiza: you know we have a train syste-
Marie: I ran through the tunnels as the train wasn't present
Kaiza: ..................
Kaiza: you should be happy you're alive ...........
Marie: .............................
Kaiza: (sighs) come in, ill get your test done
Marie: thank you
Kaiza: (thinking) you're not really welcomed though

*with that, they head to a table and grab a chair, to sit down and duel manually*

Marie: why the manual duel ?
Kaiza: because its faster
Kaiza: now take your deck out of your disc and lets start
Marie: fine

*they take their decks out of their discs, shuffle them, and start a duel

Kaiza: ill go first, and by the way, why is your extra deck so ...................... small
Marie: I only have what I need here
Kaiza: ok ....
Kaiza: ill set 2 cards face down (bottomless trap hole, ryko, lightsworn hunter)
Marie: ill summon blackwing, bora the spear in attack mode
Kaiza: ill activate bottomless trap hole, destroying and banishing it
Marie: well ill set two cards (bottomless trap hole, sakuretsu armor) and end my turn
Kaiza: well, my turn
Kaiza: ill flip ryko, lightsworn hunter and use his effect to destroy your face down card (bottomless trap hole) and send the top 3 cards from my deck to the grave (sangan, mystical space typhoon, glow up bulb)
Kaiza: now ill summon lyla, lightsworn sorceress, and use her effect, switching her to defense mode to destroy your face down card (sakuretsu armor)
Marie: ................
Kaiza: ..........................
Kaiza: anyway, ill activate emergency teleport, and special summon krebons from my deck, and ill send lyla, ryko and krebons to the grave to synchro summon scrap dragon
Kaiza: scrap dragon attacks
Marie: (mumbling voice) synchros .... (Marie's lp: 5200)
Kaiza: something wrong ?
Marie: nothing ..............
Kaiza: well, ill end my turn
Marie: ill go, ill summon blackwing, gale the whirlwind to the field, and use its effect to cut the attack of scrap dragon by 1/2
Kaiza: hu ...
Marie: and ill set 1 card (icarus attack)and end my turn
Kaiza: Shocked
Kaiza: well, my turn
Kaiza: scrap dragon attacks gale (Marie's lp: 5100)
Kaiza: now ill set 2 cards (mirror force, honest) and ill end my turn
Marie: my turn, ill summon luster dragon to the field
Kaiza: (thinking) this in blackwings ?
Marie: now luster dragon will attack scrap dragon !
Kaiza: ill activate mirror force, and destroy Luster dragon
Marie: ..................
Marie: fine..............I end my turn .............
Kaiza: well, my turn
Kaiza: ill summon junk synchron, and use his effect to special summon ryko, lightsworn hunter from my grave
Kaiza: ill flip summon honest, and ill synchro summon using honest, junk synchron and ryko, to special summon trishula, dragon of the ice barrier
Kaiza: ill use his effect, and ill banish 1 card from your hand (dark hole) and 1 from your field (icarus attack)
Marie: is this all you can do .....
Kaiza: .................
Kaiza: (thinking) this girl is rude, for a girl with a more than weird deck)
Kaiza: no, its not, 3 dark monsters in my grave means I can special summon dark armed dragon now
Kaiza: and now, all will proceed to attack (Marie's lp: 0)
Marie: hmph
Kaiza: *sighs*
Kaiza: anyway, we have one more due to go, then some ruling questions
Kaiza: do you have a side deck you want to use ?
Marie: no
Kaiza: .....................
Kaiza:lets get started then .....
Kaiza: you go first

*after reshuffling their decks, they go again*

Marie: ill set 2 cards face down (blackwing - camila the haze, torrential tribute) and ill end my turn
Kaiza: well, my turn
Kaiza: ill activate charge of the light brigade, and send the top 3 cards of my deck (glow up bulb, dark hole, dark armed dragon) to add lyla, lightsworn sorceress from my deck to my hand
Kaiza: ill summon lyla, lightsworn sorceress to the field, and ill use her effect to destroy your face down card (torrential tribute)
Kaiza: now ill activate emergency teleport, and special summon krebons from my deck
Kaiza: ill send lyla and krebons to the grave to special summon tempest magician
Marie: (mumbling) more darn synchros...
Kaiza: ........
Kaiza: anyway, tempest magician attacks
Marie: it was camila the haze, a backwing
Kaiza: uhh, sure
Kaiza: ill set 1 card (bottomless trap hole) and end my turn
Marie: ill go
Marie: ill activate monster reborn, and special summon blackwing, camila the haze from my grave
Marie: next ill summon blackwing, breeze the zephyr, and send them to the grave to summon blackwing armed wing
Kaiza: why not reborn lyla and use it against me ?
Marie: I like to win with my own cards
Kaiza: ............. well............................. ill activate bottomless trap hole, and banish it
Marie: ................
Marie: I end my turn
Kaiza: my turn
Kaiza: ill banish lyla and krebons from my grave to summon chaos sorcerer, and ill use bulb's effect, sending the top card of my deck to the grave (junk synchron) to special summon it
Kaiza: ill send bulb and sorcerer to the grave to special summon arcanite magician from my extra deck, on 2 counters, 1000 attack for each
Marie: ...............
Kaiza: now ill use tempest magician, and discard my last 3 cards (heavy storm, honest, cyber dragon) to give arcanite magician 3 more counters, for 5400 attack
Kaiza: arcanite magician and tempest magician attacks (Marie's lp: 400)
Marie: it's not over yet
Kaiza: ............
Kaiza: now ill use tempest magician's 2nd effect, removing all counters from the field, 6 in total, to do 3000 more damage
Marie: ....................... (Marie's lp:0)
Kaiza: well, the duel test is over
Marie: is synchros all you can use ?
Kaiza: ............................
Kaiza: lets go to the ruling questions now please
Marie: fine
Kaiza: anyway, question 1, if ryko has his effect to destroy negated by stardust dragon
Marie: even your questions involve synchros !
Kaiza: just answer it !
Kaiza: and ryko is this card

*from his deck, he pulls out ryko, lightsworn hunter from his deck and shows her it*

Marie: ok, now what ?
Kaiza: if stardust dragon negates his effect to destroy, will he be able to send 3 cards from the top of your deck to the grave ?
Marie: yes he will
Kaiza: no
Marie: ??
Kaiza: the entirely of his effect is negated, so it means he cant apply any of his effects, so the answer is no
Marie: then I change my answer to no
Kaiza: Shocked
Marie: you didn't say I couldn't change it, so I change it to no Very Happy
Kaiza:................
Kaiza: fine .........
Kaiza: (thinking) neither the Ra or the Obelisk dorm has a room for you then

Location: ADA Entrance Hall, time: 5:43 pm

*Marie is leaving the entrance hall with Kaiza watching her leave*

Kaiza: you can come back for your results tomorrow, until then, hope for the best
Kaiza: (thinking) and expect the worst
Marie: sure, and by the way
Kaiza: hm ?
Marie: you're no different than other duelist .........
Kaiza: ???
Marie: synchro...............spammer !
Kaiza: ......................

*with that, she turns her back to him and walks off*

Kaiza: (thinking) I dont get paid enough for this

*with that, Kaiza walks off to the office area, and a while after walking as if he ran a mile, rendevouz with Loruka in the office hall*

Loruka: master what is -

*before she could finish, he hands her the stack of paper and continues straggling along, slowly moving towards the bathroom*

Kaiza: place those in the testing office
Loruka: yes master
Loruka: also, definition needed for the following words
Loruka: mannequin
Loruka: kiss
Kaiza: (thinking) >_<
Loruka: porn
Kaiza: (thinking) urgh ! >_<
Kaiza: ill define them later
Loruka: definition needed for the word later
Kaiza: (facepalm)...............
Kaiza: definition of later, at a given time interval from the current time
Loruka: definition recorded
Loruka: ill request the definitions for the words later then
Kaiza: sure.............

*with that, Kaiza reaches the bathroom door and wildly swings it open, then enters and slams the door behind him*

Kaiza: (thinking) this test run sucked more for me than for her ....

(iEnd of chatper 5)









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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Thu Jan 05, 2012 11:17 am

Great it's looking good and i like how tough alice gets, keep it up


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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Sun Jan 08, 2012 11:32 am

This is a comment from the Awesome NerverMind

Wow good story or rather call it an awesome story i'm lazy when it comes to reading but your story was totally nice so i finish reading it i hope you make more awesome story like this one my rate is 10/10 a perfect rate from NerverMind yipee yiha oh yeah.

That's all i can say for now. Smile



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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Wed Jan 11, 2012 9:30 pm

YES! im in it!


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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Mon Feb 20, 2012 10:33 pm

Is this some sort of joke?


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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Mon Feb 20, 2012 11:57 pm

for me, in a way

and chapter 5 is done







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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Sun Feb 26, 2012 6:49 am

Chapter 6: Introductions and Tensions, part 1

Location: Marie's room, time: 9:00 am

*its 2 weeks after the opening registration day, and Marie can be seen talking on a phone, walking up and down in her room

Person on phone: so how was opening day
Marie:(on phone) it was a success, I got admitted without a problem
Person on phone: good to know
Person on phone: so any strong duelists there ?
Marie: it was opening day, I wouldn't know, only person I dueled was the tester
Person on phone: and how was he ?
Marie: well......

*flashback*

Location: ADA Entrance Hall, time: 5:43 pm

*Marie is leaving the entrance hall with Kaiza watching her leave*

Kaiza: you can come back for your results tomorrow, until then, hope for the best
Kaiza: (thinking) and expect the worst
Marie: sure, and by the way
Kaiza: hm ?
Marie: you're no different than other duelist .........
Kaiza: ???
Marie: synchro...............spammer !
Kaiza: ......................

*with that, she turns her back to him and walks off*


*flashback ends*

Marie: (on phone) he's strong, to say the least
Person on phone: good, ill come right over !
Marie: (on phone) wait !
Person on phone: huh ?
Marie:..............................
Marie: (on phone) nevermind, come right over, ill show you who the person is too
Marie: (thinking) lets see how he likes being spammed !
Person on phone: great !
Person on phone: and while we're at it
Marie: (on phone) huh ?
Person on phone: what dorm did you get ?
Marie: uhhhhhhh

location: ADA Obelisk Blue dorm room, time: 9:00 am

*on the bed of one of the rooms, Kaiza drops body first onto it, lifeless except for breathing*

Kaiza: (sighs)

*flashback*

Location: ADA Entrance Hall, time: 5:43 pm

Marie: synchro...............spammer !
Kaiza: ......................

*with that, she turns her back to him and walks off*

Kaiza: (thinking) I dont get paid enough for this

*with that, Kaiza walks off to the office area, and a while after walking as if he ran a mile, rendevouz with Loruka in the office hall*

*flashback ends*

Kaiza: (thinking) I cant believe she made Ra stilll
Kaiza: (thinking) she best dont come to me for a retest ..............
Kaiza: (thinking) right about now, all I want to do is -

*then, Loruka enters the room*

Loruka: Master, Snakedoc wishes to see us both
Kaiza: (thinking)(holds his hair and screams like a scared woman)

Location: ADA head Admin office, time: 9:05 am

*on the phone*

Snakedoc: (on phone) so basically, you all have no idea what this place is
KingWolfy: (on other line) no. And whoever made it sure made it hard to crack
Snakedoc: (on phone) hmmmm, and what of the soul hacker kagami said was responsible for the hacking 4 weeks ago ?
kingWolfy: (on other line) never heard of her, but its definitely something to look out for

*then, Kaiza and Loruka enter the room, with Kaiza seeming very tense*

Snakedoc: (on phone) hold on, ill call back

*and the snakedoc hangs up the phone*

Kaiza: you wanted to see us ?
Sankedoc: yes, take a seat

*with that, Loruka and Kaiza each take a chair next to his desk and sit on it*

Kaiza: well ?
Snakedoc: well, as a start I'd like to say, that Opening day was a success thanks to you all
Kaiza: but we still dont get paid for it ........
Snakedoc:.................
Snakedoc: no, as you still have something that originally belonged to us
Kaiza: -_-
Snakedoc: and, at the same time
Snakedoc: we'll like Loruka to become a member of the testing staff
Kaiza: huh ?
Snakedoc: you cant be a tester here. First off you're only part time student here, and we need you for this ongoing battle
Snakedoc: so you're not an option
Kaiza:...........
Snakedoc: but Loruka is, and her performance as a tester was great at Opening day
Kaiza: how do you know ?
Snakedoc: I asked alice to observe her
Kaiza: oh .............
Snakedoc: so, if its allowed, we'd like her to come back as a tester
Snakedoc: this ok with you ?
Kaiza: (sighs)
Kaiza: just dont break her .....
Snakedoc: excellent !
Snakedoc: have her head down to the tester's office and meet Xanxus, he'll show her everything she needs to do as one
Loruka: master, is this acceptable ?
Kaiza: (thinking) why does she keep calling me that ? -_-
Kaiza: sure, go on ahead
Loruka: ok then

*with that, she gets off her chair and heads out of the room, while Kaiza stays*

Snakedoc: by the way
Kaiza: hm ?

*snakedoc lifts his hand and shows Kaiza the cast still wrapped around it*

Snakedoc: I am more worried that she breaks me instead
Kaiza: sorry.............
Snakedoc: it'll be done healing in 2 weeks
Snakedoc: also about the incident at the hideout we found...............
Kaiza: hm ?
Snakedoc: outside of Kagami, who was hacked, did you find any other female soul hacker ?
Kaiza: no, why ?
Snakedoc: she said it was a female soul hacker responsible for all this
Snakedoc: not only that
Kaiza: huh ?
Skanedoc: she didn't even duel them
Kaiza: what ?
Snakedoc: she placed her hand on the ground, and it turned black, after that, we all went unconscious
Snakedoc: when a person is hacked their conscience is shut off, and the soul hacker takes control of their bodies
Snakedoc: given enough time in possession of the body, they then become its conscience
Snakedoc: that is how we get soul hackers capable of thought, and what I described just now was what happened to Kagami
Snakedoc: she was ready to duel the hacker, but never did
Kaiza: ...........................
Kaiza: so now soul hackers dont need to duel anymore
Snakedoc: we dont know for sure yet, but it does raises some concern
Kaiza: Kagami joined ADA too right ?
Snakedoc: yes, I believe so
Kaiza: ill go talk to her, be back soon

*Kaiza gets off the chair and goes to head out of the room, but snakedoc stops him*

Snakedoc: wait !
Kaiza: hm ?
Snakedoc: while at it
Snakedoc: you said a new member to FK also joined here, can you see how she's doing ?
Kaiza: who told you that ?
Snakedoc: Xanxus
Kaiza: oh
Kaiza: then the new member you're talking about must be

Location: ADA Slifer Dorm rooms, time: 9:10 am

*a girl knocks on the door to the room and waits for an answer, and gets none*

Anna: (sighs)
Anna: ill just enter

*with that, she opens the door and opens it, to find 3 people, 2 girls and a boy, dueling manually on the floor. The room itself could use a clean up, and the beds are double deckers with the beds a bit messed up*

Anna: you all were right there ?
Alice_k: ???
Anna: so why didn't you open the door ?!
Alice_k: we get visitors all the time, so we just leave the door unlocked and let people enter
Alice_k: if you didn't know that, you must be new here
Ageha: just like me !
Anna: ................well, I am and that is one awful way to greet people
Alice_k: I'm sorry, if it helps, welcome to the Slifer dorm, the lowest, but most popular dorm in the academy
Alice_k: my name is alice

*she then points to ageha*

Alice_k: this is ageha
Ageha: hi, nice to meet you

*she then points to the male that is with them*

Alice_k: and this is
SlushieBits: slushie
Anna: Slushie ?
SlushieBits: yes

*with that, anna falls to the floor and laughs oncontrollably*

SlushieBits: yea yea, kiss my (censored)
Anna: sorry its just so funny !
Alice_k: (sighs)
Ageha: well, what can I say ?
Ageha: welcome to -

*before they could finish, a tall man in a red coat and red shades walks in, starting everyone and making Anna stop laughing*

Alice_k: ................
Anna: huh ?
CyberZane: sup (censored)es
Alice_k: oh, its you
Anna: hey !
CyberZane: hm ?

*he takes off his shades and looks down to see Anna on the floor, pretty pissed*

CyberZane: and you are ?
Anna: Anna Valcarcel, and I consider being called ..............can you repeat that last word ?
CyberZane: (censored) ?
Anna: yes !
Anna: I consider being called that very rude
Alice_k: (thinking) she has no idea he's the leader for the slifer dorm, and that he doesn't give a crap about what she thinks
Ageha: (whispering in alice's ears) he's pretty rude, just like her
Alice_k: (under her voice) more or less
CyberZane: aww that's so sweet of you shrimpy one
Anna: grr !
CyberZane: dont like being called the short stuff you are ?
CyberZane: so cute
CyberZane: guess what ?
Anna: what ?!
CyberZane: I dont give a -


Location: ADA Ra Yellow Classroom, time: 9:20 am

*class is in session, and 1/2 of the class, including Kagami, look almost asleep*

LegendaryFrost: now one has to remember if you activate a card effect, you must always pay the cost even if you didnt get the effect
LegendaryFrost: and costs are written in the format of "you can................then"
Kamagi: (yawns)
Kagami: (thinking) when will this class be over ?
LegendaryFrost: this is very important when identifying how effects res-

*before he can finish, Kaiza opens the classroom door and stops him*

LegendaryFrost: and you are ?
Kaiza: sorry, good morning, name is Kaiza
LegendaryFrost: uh huh, and what brings you here ?

*kIaza enters the class and talks to LegendaryFrost for a while, pausing the class session*

Kaiza: (under his voice) The head admin office would like to see Jessica Kagami
Kaiza: (under his voice) but the mike system is temporarilary offline, so they asked me to go get her
LegendaryFrost: I see
LegendaryFrost: and if I were to ask the head admin on this, he would approve ?
Kaiza: yes
LegendaryFrost: alright then

*he then turns and addresses the class*

LegendaryFrost: who here goes by the name of Jessica Kagami ?
Kagami: (raising) oh ! that would be me !
LegendaryFrost: Kaiza has told me the head admin would like to see you
Kagami: oh really ?
Kagami: sure !

*with that she gets off her desk and walks towards Kaiza*

Kagami: (under her voice) what is going on ?
Kaiza: (under his voice) ill explain on the way
Kagami: (under her voice) uhh, ok then

*with that, they leave the class and close the door, but instead of heading towards the admin's office, they head in the direction of the entrance hall*

Kagami: uhh, isn't the head admin office that -
Kaiza: he said to get you, but not to take you to the admin's office
Kaiza: I have some questions, about what happened at the lab you all found
Kaiza: can you describe what happened ?
Kagami: well.......

*flashback*

location: Unknown location in the forest, time: 9:00 am, Month: July

*Kagami and 3 others are scouting the area around the lab they found, when, out in the distance, a young girl, who appears to be in their late teens, walks in their direction*

Kagami: huh ?

*with that, Kagami checks her detector. On it, 3 green dots on a blue background represent them, while for the girl approaching, she appears as a large black circle, with black waves pulsing away from her. The image makes Kamagi cold sweat as the girl stops a distance away from them*

Kagami: (worried expression) who are you ?
Unknown Girl: I've been sent to tell you that i'll be taking this operation over from here ^_^
Kagami: not on my watch !

*with that, she immediately activates her duel discs and readies herself for battle, but the girl simply kneels down and places her hands on the floor as the other members of Kamagi's group arrive on the scene*

Unknown Girl: a duel huh ? that would be very nice
Unknown Girl: but unfortunately
Kagami: huh ?
Unknown Girl: I dont have time for that
Uknown Girl: infection circuit !

*with that, the grass and the ground around the girl turns black, almost as if diseased and sprayed by tar. The area of infection spreads rapidly, reaching to the group in seconds. Upon contact with the group, an electric shock circuits through their bodies, making them unable to do anything as they too become covered in the black infection. Kagami gets 1 last glimpse of her radar, which shows an entire black background as the green dots fade away*

*flashback ends*

Kagami: and that was it, that's what happened
Kaiza: and, how did this girl look
Kagami: well, she sure didn't have big breasts for sure
Kaiza: ................
Kagami: what ? Shocked
Kaiza: other than tits please .....
Kamagi: so you dont like tits ?
Kaiza: no, I mean, yes I mean, this has nothing to do with that >_<
Kagami: Very Happy
Kagami: anyway, she had brown hair, blue eyes, look no taller than you did, and, she basically looked like a normal human. She was aisan too
Kaiza: hmmmm

*flashback*

*flashback*

year: 2132, loctaion: apartment building top floor

*some girl can be found leaning on the edge of the building, when Kaiza walks in*

Girl: *sighs*
Girl: I should just end it now instead, rather than go through all this
Girl: doesn't seem like much matter now

*girl gets a pat on the shoulder*

Girl: Shocked
Kaiza: hi

*flashback end*

Kaiza:..............

*while Kaiza s lost in thought, Kagami snaps her fingers in front of him*

Kaiza: huh ?
Kagami: staring into space much ?
Kaiza: sorry
Kaiza: and, well, that's it

*with that, Kaiza walks off, away from Kagami who looks well confused*

Kagami: wait, what do I do now ?!
Kaiza: well, I said how the head admin office needed you, never said how long though
Kagami: huh ?
Kaiza: consider this a break from class, and ill be at the cafeteria if needed

*with that, he continues to walk off, leaving Kagami where she is*

Kaiza: (thinking) maybe now ill get some peace and quiet
Kagami: ......................
Kagami: sweet !

Location: ADA tester's office, time: 9:30 am

*a child walks out of the main room, hands in his pocket with an upset face as Loruka goes to opens the door. She opens it, but cannot puh it open*

Loruka: peculiar ........
Tigerclaw: not peculiar, Xanxus -_-
Loruka: hmmm

*inside the room, Xanxus sits behidn his desk, his legs on it, relaxed as ever*

Xanxus: finally some alone time from that miscreant !
Xanxus: finally I can relax
Xanxus: (thinking) I'd like to see hi push a door open with 20 stacks of books behind it
Xanxus: (thinking) hahahahahahaha !

*meanwhile*

Loruka: (processing)
Loruka: (processing complete)(CPU output) increase force exertion, time duration: 2 seconds
Loruka: (CPU Output) force exertion = 4.4 kg x 600 m/s
Loruka: (CPU Output) confirmed

*with that, she pushes on the door so hard and so fast the door flies open, throwing the stacks of books from the door, to the end of the room, and almost making Xanxus urinate himself in shock and fear*

Xanxus: oh my god what the -
Loruka: the door was closed and I needed to report to this office, so I increased force exertion on the door*
Xanxus: Shocked !!!!!!!!!!!

*tigerclaw walks to where loruka is, also shocked. He stares at the books scattered, then stares up and Loruka and hugs her leg*

Loruka: hm ?
TigerClaw: oh my god thank you so much !

*he then lets go and turns his attention to Xanxus, with an angry, but somewhat cute face*

TigerClaw: now you !
Xanxus: Shocked
TigerClaw: you owed me a duel for 4 weeks, and its about time I get it !!!
Xanxus: oh my ............... god........ Shocked

Location: ADA Cafeteria, time: 11:00 am

Kaiza: (sighs)
Kaiza: (thinking) so much for peace and quiet

*in the midst of teh Cafeteria, Kaiza is holding a burger in his hand while showing no real intention of planning to eat it. The Cafeteria is full and loud with the chewing of food, and mainly, the chattering of people*

Kaiza: (sighs)

*then, a girl comes to the other side of Kaiza's table and sits there*

Kaiza: huh ?
SeraphicGirl: hey, dont mind if I sit here ?
Kaiza: sure, go ahead
SeraphicGirl: your name is Kaiza right ?
SeraphicGirl: the one who gave me a deck a year earlier ?
Kaiza: uhh, I think I did, why ?
SeraphicGirl: I just want to say the deck is awesome !
Kaiza: huh ?
SeraphicGirl: I just started using it and I haven't lost once !
SeraphicGirl: out of 50 duels !
SeraphicGirl: no wonder you're in obelisk !
SeraphicGirl: where did you get such a great deck ?!
Kaiza: uhhhh
Kaiza: I made it myself, it took a while but I finally got it right (laughs weakly)
Kaiza: (thinking) where indeed .......
SeraphicGirl: well you must be one great deck maker then, if so can you -

*before she could finish, a girl sits right next to her, startling her and interupting the conversation*

Anna: alright Kaiza, I did your test and I got slifer, happy now ?
Kaiza: (thinking) urgh, Snakedoc will have my head for this ..........
SeraphicGirl: excuse me but who are you ?
Anna: huh ?
Anna: I should ask you that
SeraphicGirl: well, I am Sabrina, a friend of Kaiza, now who are you ?
Anna: a team mate of Kaiza, and I have something of importance to discuss
SeraphicGirl: what makes you think you have more rights than me to talk to him ?
SeraphicGirl: my stuff may be of importance too
SeraphicGirl: or is it that you are his girlfriend ?
Kaiza and Anna: no -_-
SeraphicGirl: so are you in love with him or something ?
Anna: no you...........just no -_-
Anna: (thinking)alright Anna, no insults
SeraphicGirl: so why do you think what you have to discuss is more important than what I have to discuss ?
SeraphicGirl: or are you here to confess ?
Anna: (thinking) that does it

*she pulls out and ipod, and after pressing a few buttons to find a track, plays it and places the earpieces into SeraphicGirl's ears*

SeraphicGirl: hmmm
Anna: listen
SeraphicGirl: I am
SeraphicGirl:..............................you wish you had my life as a teenager ?
SeraphicGirl: my life as a teenager was pretty miserable so
Anna: no
Anna: what I am saying is, since you think what you have to say is more important than my own, you simply dont seem to care for my opinion, so.......
Anna: I am calling you a teenage dirtbag
SeraphicGirl: Shocked
Anna: Very Happy
Kaiza: (thinking) oh jeez .......

*a few seconds later, Xanxus settles down on a chair, with a drink in a cup, and a burger on his plate, but before he could pick up the burger, what appears to be someone running at the same speed of sound runs across his table, stepping on his drink and completely flattening it. In the split second it takes for her to cross the table, the following happens*

Xanxus: Shocked
Anna: eep .......
Xanxus: (facepalms himself)

*and a second after Anna dashes over his table, another girl dashes over the table*

SeraphicGirl: (thinking) and you'll be a dead (censored) soon !

*meanwhile, at Kaiza's desk Loruka comes and joins him*

Loruka: hello master
Kaiza: keep guard over my food for me, ill be back soon
Loruka: ok

*with that, Kaiza gets up and walks off to the exit of the cafeteria, while Anna jumps out a window to get away from SeraphicGirl, who then uses the side entrance and chases Anna all the way through the relaxation park, until she climbs up a tree to get away*

Location: ADA relaxation park, time: 11:30 am

*Kaiza sits on one of the chairs in the park, whilem a distance away, SeraphicGirl sits near the tree which Anna is on*

Anna: you got to leave this place sometime !
Anna: and when you do, ill get away !
SeraphicGirl: you got to get off the tree sometime
SeraphicGirl: and when you do, ill kill you

*while Anna ans SeraphicGirl are bickering at each other, a girl with crimson hair comes and sits on the other end of Kaiza's chair, looking a bit bored*

Alice_k: mind if I sit here ?
Kaiza: no, go right ahead
Alice_k: thanks
Alice_k: you're the guy who helped me with opening day right ?
Kaiza: uhh, yea, your name is Alice right ?
Alice_k: yea
Kaiza: well, yea it was me who helped
Alice_k: well, thanks
Alice_k: you also helped me with something last year but, the details are all fogged up, I can barely remember .....
Kaiza: uhh.................I can remember but, its a long story ill tell you sometime
Alice_k: oh, well, thanks
Kaiza: no problem I guess
Alice_k: hmmmmm
Alice_k: so how did you end up at this academy ?
Kaiza: hm ?
Alice_k: I ended up here as my friend Life Stream Dragon asked me to
Alice_k: but the test put me in slifer and I was awful at dueling
Alice_k: then, Xanxus dueled me for his surival and after, he started showing me how to duel and make decks
Alice_k:soon enough I was winning against people from the Ra dorm easily, but I never bothered to take a retest and stayed in Slifer
Alice_k: so what's your story ?
Kaiza: well
Kaiza: its a long one, just like what happened a year ago, even I can barey explain
Kaiza: as for the incident that happened...........its a bit hard to believe, and if I explain it, you have to promise not to tell anyone
Kaiza: ok ?
Alice_k: well, ok and I've been fed incredible stuff before, so go on ahead
Kaiza: well, ok, what happened is -
Marie: Kaiza
Kaiza: huh ?

*Marie, in the distance, comes and stops a short distance away from the chair Kaiza and Alice_k are sitting on*

Kaiza: oh, hey
Kaiza: what is -

*before he could finish, she immediately locks onto his duel disc*

Marie: you're dueling me, here and now
Kaiza: (sighs)

End of Chapter 6









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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Tue Feb 28, 2012 5:28 am

Good work as always Very Happy



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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Tue Feb 28, 2012 7:56 am

I am suprised im not in your stories


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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Mon Mar 05, 2012 9:07 am

well, you're in it now, and not in a rude way, its not meant to be rude

chapter 6 is finished







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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Mon Mar 05, 2012 11:20 am

Its ok ennie i love it


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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Mon Mar 05, 2012 4:06 pm

Yadda, yadda.

That's really all I have to say. -_-


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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Mon Mar 05, 2012 9:35 pm

the amount of rude lines I want to tell you right now ....................... its not even funny -_-







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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Tue Mar 06, 2012 8:58 am

Mokie, stay off ennie or imma pull your hair out Sad >:


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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Tue Mar 06, 2012 5:43 pm

Aki wrote:
Yadda, yadda.

That's really all I have to say. -_-

If that's all you can say then keep your pretty mouth shut!

Or I will shut it for you!




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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Tue Mar 06, 2012 9:01 pm

No, you won't. You are mad that I said that? Well, he insulted me! Happy?


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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Soul Duelist: Mechanical Angel   Tue Mar 06, 2012 9:22 pm

I don't care if he insulted you or not! This thread is made about his story not you complaining that he insults you!




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