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PostSubject: Hallowe's Gallery   Sat Feb 26, 2011 1:54 am

Hey you, Hey Guest,
I'm just showing some stuff I do
I mostly do this to kill time Hahaha
Hope you see something you like
And I don't wanna see ratings on here
I'm just showcasing not looking for criticism!!



















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PostSubject: Re: Hallowe's Gallery   Sat Feb 26, 2011 12:51 pm



I like this one.. o.o I would criticize but you told me not to. ;P


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PostSubject: Re: Hallowe's Gallery   Fri Mar 04, 2011 10:35 am

Fine you can rate and tell me what i need to fix


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PostSubject: Re: Hallowe's Gallery   Fri Mar 04, 2011 12:24 pm

Gud job. I like most of them


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PostSubject: Re: Hallowe's Gallery   Fri Mar 04, 2011 6:52 pm

There's too much to rate so I'll just go with that one I like! ;D



Okies.

Colours are good, text is great, effects need work.. needs flow. The left side is great but in the right side, there is just no flow. xP When using scanlines, it's best to decrease the opacity of it and that's what you should do. Lighting needs work, needs a light source. The Light source in the render seems to be coming from the bottom near the middle; more to the right. The Bevel isn't so great and it's used rarely in signatures.. but I like your idea.. very unique (in a good way). Lastly, the border is probably the worst colour it could be, lol. Sorry for that, but that colour really doesn'y suit it. I think Black should go nicely there, the colour black is commonly used as borders.

EDIT: Something I missed. The "Hallowe" text should be closer to the render.. xP


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PostSubject: Re: Hallowe's Gallery   Wed Mar 09, 2011 3:03 am

Thats a Great eye you got there i should let you critique my work all the time or instead do some touch eyes i can send you the stuff or layers from photoshop but now that mention it, it became more apparent thank you


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PostSubject: Re: Hallowe's Gallery   Wed Mar 09, 2011 6:36 pm

Lol, thanks. xP

I've kinda always been better at criticizing than actually doing GFX. xD


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PostSubject: Re: Hallowe's Gallery   Sat May 28, 2011 5:58 am



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PostSubject: Re: Hallowe's Gallery   Sat May 28, 2011 6:09 am

They all are really cool! ^^




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PostSubject: Re: Hallowe's Gallery   Sat May 28, 2011 8:47 am

well i suck at critisizing and rating, so ill just go with pein


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PostSubject: Re: Hallowe's Gallery   Sat May 28, 2011 12:53 pm

Lol.

Well, I haven't criticized or even done any GFX work in a while so yeah.

Here it goes.

Firstly, the background doesn't seem to fit the render, colour-wise and effect-wise. I like that little bubble explosion effect near the render in the background and that's the only part of the background that seems to fit. The background seems to lack flow but there isn't much you can do with that render as it's not.. ermm.. how do I say it.. action-y enough? Lol.

Render placement is fine. The render needs to be blended in with the background. Try adding some adjustment layers to fix the colours and maybe something little smudging on the sides to make it look right! xP

The light source seems to be in the wrong place, if you look carefully at the render, you'll find that the light source is coming from around the top left of the render, maybe a little further to the left.

The text placement, size and colours aren't good, the font is fine. It just needs to be near the render, a little smaller and the colour should be picked from the render itself or the background.

Nice work.

Some criticizing may be inaccurate due to the lack of GFX-ing. ;P


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PostSubject: Re: Hallowe's Gallery   Sat May 28, 2011 10:17 pm

I havent done any GFX since the last post just something to get back into but thanks for the input


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